Blue Senryu

Blue Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
"

Jump for Joy! I told you that you could dance Arzel! ~

"
You know her as Blue

Who is that teenage nutter?

A phenomenon!


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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What a great treat after my examination week, Mothernutter! Surely you've exercised your comical muscles on this one. And you've got a hilarious choice of GIF, too! (I want to ask how to put such here. Obviously, civilization progressed without my knowledge.) My! That's such an adorable girl who seems to be having the best moment of her life. I wish I were as physically-coordinated as she. My body parts are funny when they try to 'dance' (scariest word ever!) and I don't know why you said that I COULD dance. ;)

You seem to be taking the label "teenage nutter" seriously nowadays. ;) I just would like to remind you I called you my 'mother nutter' for the same reason.

I deeply appreciate this entertaining senryu, mother. :P Thank you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wooooo, hope you were up dancing to this one nutter....how can moving your soul be scary silly, anyo.. read more



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Omg....that is too funny!! Haha... great little tribute to Arzel!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This made me smile from ear to ear, but I was lost to what it referred to, I'm an idiot when it comes to poetic reference... Most times need to be told the obvious... Still love it though.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

It was written for ArzelJoy aka Blue, if you haven't read her poetry you really should, she's quite .. read more
What a great treat after my examination week, Mothernutter! Surely you've exercised your comical muscles on this one. And you've got a hilarious choice of GIF, too! (I want to ask how to put such here. Obviously, civilization progressed without my knowledge.) My! That's such an adorable girl who seems to be having the best moment of her life. I wish I were as physically-coordinated as she. My body parts are funny when they try to 'dance' (scariest word ever!) and I don't know why you said that I COULD dance. ;)

You seem to be taking the label "teenage nutter" seriously nowadays. ;) I just would like to remind you I called you my 'mother nutter' for the same reason.

I deeply appreciate this entertaining senryu, mother. :P Thank you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wooooo, hope you were up dancing to this one nutter....how can moving your soul be scary silly, anyo.. read more
hhaaaa Love it!!! that is amazing AND made me smile:))))

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

So jazz'd it did, thanks maria! :)
maria  ( rose)

10 Years Ago

my pleasure. :))
Ya did awesome my dear friend and created a great gesture:)))))))))))))) And I know Arzel loves it:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue

10 Years Ago

I love it, of course! Thank you, Jon!
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10 Years Ago

Why I knew ud love it he he:))))))))))) Frieda did great:)))))))) She gets the thanks on all she did.. read more
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10 Years Ago

Btw that little girl dancing ant gonna have no arms left
Haha girl got some moves lol.This is hilarious :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Hahaha consider your self socked lol
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha don't let redwood hear you say that ;-)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Haha redwood .You are right don't let him hear :)
She's a talent. Loved the dancing anime.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

She certainly is, that's actually Blue, don't tell anyone. ;-)
zephyr

10 Years Ago

She looks good as a blonde.
Blue

10 Years Ago

What lies have you been telling everyone, mother? Hahaha.
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ron
OMG that is so funny. So how did you get Blue to dance like that for you?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

10 Years Ago

Who me? Tell her? about..what you said? Oh I wouldn't think of doing anything like that....;)
Blue

10 Years Ago

I won't tell her, I promise! :)
ron

10 Years Ago

:)........
That is sweet and hilarious, such a delightfully fun read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Jazz'd you enjoyed Dale, that kid never gets tired...
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

I remember those days *sigh*
Uplifting and appreciative of her talent and worth. She will love this. Grazie Mille for sharing...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:).....................................
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Anything but that scary Chucky doll face. ;P
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:)................................

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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