tunnel vision's delusions

Essentially oblivious

 hiding in private vacuums

seeking to catch

 the next tripping bubble

bursting at the seams

  in austerity's realm

out of conjugated burbles 

   mind's sleight of hand

tangents in high def

 spider monkey web'd deception

blindfold'd in pink's pristine

 peaceful illusion'd crack clouds

pips on crackerjack'd

  overload's systems switch

spinning round inside

   tunnel vision's delusions

tied-dyed confusion midst

  magic garden's 

  upheaval of intrusions

coffee perking over 

  a dark horizon's bluff

semi-consciously bliss'd 

 in information's overdrive

rotations quietude

 flipping birds of paradise 

woke up on the wrong side 

  of inventory 

glow lights of night  

   dark umber'd news

 of half past 

    comfortably numb  

riding out the storm

   without oar's directives

satisfyingly unaware

   for all infinity & beyon

d...  

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Well dayum, girl. There is so much in this poem that it practically jumps out at me, shouts boo, then runs away... if you think I am chasing it then you got another thing coming because one; I'm too slow and secondly, I am awe-struck. Ha. I loved this soooooooo much!!!!

[Frieda P]

It came out of a discussion with Benji, so yeah, you knew it'd be obtuse & abstruse, our conversations always are. haha Thanks for your input sweet pea! xo

[s y e]

Ha, I should have guessed that! ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

I know, right? Silly you....... ;P Oh sheesh, your confuzzelment is Featured hah ;)

[s y e]

Oh deary me, that is embarrassment. Trust them to feature it when I was confuzzled, ha! Just great....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Another stunning write Frieda.

Kaze~

[Tai Ryens]

From this I envisioned paranoia as the tunnel vision through which you perceive the world, of which your speaker sees the world satisfyingly, as said vision might restrain him from happiness by forcing him to live a life in which he antagonizes everything from the entire world for fear of deception, and describes the dull clouds and the tiny world in which he lives as beautiful because there is nothing else to compare it with. He's, in other words, blindfold'd. Well done.

[Saddam]

spinning round inside
tunnel vision's delusions

out of conjugated burbles
mind's sleight of hand

satisfyingly unaware
for all infinity & beyond...

It is always joyful to read you dear. Great one. I set my vision through your poem. Thanks.

[Rita L. Sev]

So many amazing images to wrap my head around - sort of a whirlwind in that tunnel, I think! Got the neurons firing, Frieda!

[Jack...]

Now this is truly a beautiful labyrinth of words and phrases. So many twists and turns that I find my lost within this piece and I am loving every minute of it. No tunnel vision her as this wonderful posm sends our eyes scattering in every direction, eb=njoy all of the visions you have created my sweet friend.

"Flipping birds of paradise"...now there is a line and a vision. You certainly can bring colorful thoughts to my mind.

Amazing as always Frieda. You never cease to blow my mind.

[Zahra]

Beautiful imagery. Liked it very much

[Shaquana Adams]

Love the imagery. It jumps off the page :) Good work!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is gorgeous Chica but I have not had my coffee yet so my brain is protesting about its ability to wrap itself around such finery .Loved it hunny :)

[Frieda P]

I can't see, never mind read without my first cuppa at least....drink up pazzo and thanks muchly! Good morning... ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome .Good morning chica :)

[Frieda P]

Did you have that cuppa yet?

[Brittany Zedalis]

Just like Noodle, I am awe-struck. Yet another wonderful poem. :]

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Brittany, jazz'd you enjoyed. :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

You're welcome :]

[MsJewel]

Love the use of metaphor and the images you have created. You never cease to amaze me Frieda.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Julie, you're always so kind my sweet friend. :-) x