Michelangelo & cherry pits

~'forever in blue jeans'

You are my Michelangelo

      Dom Pérignon & caviar ~

     rumble of a tumble in the back seat

           of an old dilapidated jeep,

            plumrose honey wine bliss'd sighs

    you flip me sideways to newfangl'd heights

      unfurl my spirit brilliantly to soar

            bring me back to earth once more

    clear my blue jeans view'd horizons,

       my heart's darkly desir'd hot chocolate

                       sweltering melted kisses

             dipp'd within the cherrypit bloom 

                         of my rapturous soul's anticipation  

Author's Note

Bowl of Cherries with Musicians ~ Michelangelo Caravaggio, 1595

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love the contrasts ... aristocratic age and fine art (itself innovative contrasts of light and dark) fine wine ...delicate expensive foods and then the blue jeans ...ohh the blue jeans ... flames growing higher with regard to the beautiful ... in a jeep's back seat no less .. puts a smile on my face this morning :))
E.

[Frieda P]

Ahhh you made my morning dear E ;-) Grazie mille xo

[RichGee]

You are my Michelangelo
Dom Pérignon & caviar ~
Of Poetry....In the back of a dilapidated jeep!
Yes Mam...

[Frieda P]

OH my heart just skipped a beat. ;-) Grazie mille!

[RichGee]

Truly my pleasure

[Madalyn Beck]

Now this is a satisfying read! Though the end sure did leave me wanting through these lines.

"my heart's darkly desir'd hot chocolate
sweltering melted kisses
dipp'd within the cherrypit bloom
of my rapturous soul's anticipation"

Marvelous, my dear Frieda! xo :)

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance to your review, thanks muchly Madalyn! :) xo

[Madalyn Beck]

Any time! I'm glad I can make you happy dance! :)

[Frieda P]

Especially today, one of those days, how much do I owe ya? ;)

[Madalyn Beck]

Your happiness is payment enough. I love to entertain and make people happy. :)

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished :)

[BlackRose]

Like fine wine, savoring every sip. Whirling it in the mouth, hit of the taste so delectable, filling the senses. Love the blue jeans baby. ;o) Fantabulous piece darling.

[Frieda P]

Ah cheers BlackRose, you must know this dance too ;-) .....Grazie mille

[BlackRose]

Indeed I do darling. How could I not and with the love I got too helps. ;o)

[Coyote Poetry]

"You are my Michelangelo
Dom Pérignon & caviar '"
I enjoyed the poem. Would be amazing verbal poetry. The poem was alive with energy and drive. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Why thank you very much Coyote, so glad you enjoyed.

[m.s.early]

Michelangelo, Dom Pérignon, and caviar in the back of a jeep? Now that's what I'm talking about! Redneck style ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha that made me laugh, is that what you guys do....yeehaw sounds like a plan to me. ;) Thanks x

[Zahra]

Beautifully woven, amazing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write Frieda! Wonderful!

Kaze~ :-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Kazie! :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

All good Frieda! :-)

[Pryde Foltz]

That was a trip. Satisfying….

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed the view Pryde, where ya been hiding, have missed you kiddo.

[Pryde Foltz]

Working away at putting the Wisp in paperback. Almost there. I should be around again. Glad I was missed. The feeling is mutual.

[KWP]

nice one and lucky man whomever he is ;) makes me feel quite frisky within the read ... ahh to make another feel like they are the ends of the earth without wanting anything in return ... well perhaps just love and sexual favours xxx

[Frieda P]

More like 'was' but that's a whole other poem! ;) Thanks muchly Betty. xo

[Saddam]

Very sweet and lovely piece. I quite enjoy it. Thanks for sharing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Ssadd, glad you enjoyed.