Michelangelo & cherry pits

Michelangelo & cherry pits

A Poem by Frieda P
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~'forever in blue jeans'

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You are my Michelangelo

      Dom Pérignon & caviar ~

     rumble of a tumble in the back seat

           of an old dilapidated jeep,

            plumrose honey wine bliss'd sighs

    you flip me sideways to newfangl'd heights

      unfurl my spirit brilliantly to soar

            bring me back to earth once more

    clear my blue jeans view'd horizons,

       my heart's darkly desir'd hot chocolate

                       sweltering melted kisses

             dipp'd within the cherrypit bloom 

                         of my rapturous soul's anticipation  

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P


Bowl of Cherries with Musicians ~ Michelangelo Caravaggio, 1595

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love the contrasts ... aristocratic age and fine art (itself innovative contrasts of light and dark) fine wine ...delicate expensive foods and then the blue jeans ...ohh the blue jeans ... flames growing higher with regard to the beautiful ... in a jeep's back seat no less .. puts a smile on my face this morning :))
E.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ahhh you made my morning dear E ;-) Grazie mille xo



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awwww!!!!!! this is sweet!!! lovely

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

aww, thanks Cassie, glad you did...
Very nice poem, love the flippin and the chocolate. Like the music too. Neil Diamond rocks I don't care what anyone thinks!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Mark....
A poem that can be speaking of either the unearthly highs of the bliss felt when in love, or that can be taken as sexual innuendo speaking of nights with someone from the past . . . How intriguing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Tai, glad you enjoyed this one.
Dug this sophisticated saturated sugary piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


love the contrasts ... aristocratic age and fine art (itself innovative contrasts of light and dark) fine wine ...delicate expensive foods and then the blue jeans ...ohh the blue jeans ... flames growing higher with regard to the beautiful ... in a jeep's back seat no less .. puts a smile on my face this morning :))
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ahhh you made my morning dear E ;-) Grazie mille xo
The title brought me back to my art history classes, haha. This is a really great poem :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

That must have been some crazy fun class, thanks muchly Brittany :)
I smiled all the way through this one Frieda. Blue jeans, Dom Pérignon & caviar...you have a stellar imagination my friend. A delightful and delicious little gem!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What a kind review, thanks so much for your sweet words Julie! :)
Does such a person, really exist Frieda? If so, I do hope, one day, I am able to meet her.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

In my mind, everything does, thanks therisa.
therisa

10 Years Ago

I will hold onto that dream, Frieda.
A succulent offering here, Frieda - very much enjoyed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Rita!
Gorgeous piece hunni...really enjoyed :) x

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Tia :) x

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