All is write ~

Stitching the sky in threads of amber wonder

           embroidered of heal'd glass windows

seascapes rhyme'd in cobalt crashes

   majesty's horizons dappl'd in violaceous moon's night

emerald bramble bushes danc'd about sunlit shadows

          universe smiles bright like a child's energized zest

 all is write when the world is joined together,

                     engrav'd  in a moment's serene peace

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

All is write when the world is joined together, that brings to mind a global serenity that really is a joy to write about; writing about the history of how the peace came to be and how it functions now . . .
This brought intriguing illustrations, well done.

[Frieda P]

If only writing could make it so...thanks so much Tai.

[Shirlena]

With the state of flux that the world is in right now this is a very timely write. I can't speak for everyone but it pains me to listen to the news so I try to avoid it or take it in small doses but when I see pieces like this it helps me see that so many are feeling the woes of our society and in some way looking to "write" the wrongs. Mind blowing write Frieda.

[Shirlena]

Oh well, this is the second poem my uppity computer wouldn't let me place in the library tonight. I'll be back for this one when it feels like cooperating :).

[Frieda P]

I have to take a break from the news or I'd go totally insane, there's too much chaos and pain out there...thanks so much for your kind words Shirlena.

[m.s.early]

When the things are in place, the sea and the horizon and the sky are indistinguishable. All are are united as one. Balance is a fact of nature and yet something that humans have to struggle to attain (at times).

[Frieda P]

Thanks xavier.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Brilliantly written, Frieda. :-)

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Kazie. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Any time Frieda. ;-)

[MsJewel]

Beautiful thoughts of peace and serenity. Stunning poetry my friend.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Julie. :-)

[s y e]

Now isn't that something we all want? Too bad it can't happen, there is bound to be someone who is going to mess it up or someone who doesn't like someone else... I don't really know, all I know is that it ain't gonna happen, lol.

I loved this, again you write with so much truth and leave me wanting to more, digging deeper and enjoying myself..... xo

[Frieda P]

Sigh true noodlebumble, but we can never give up hope, right? xo

[kublakhan27]

I know of no other poet that can weave a spell with so few words as you my dear...so much colour, so much nature, so much wisdom...it would require an encyclopedia for a lesser poet to bring these attributes together so succinctly and seamlessly. Couplet two in particular took my breath away. Every moment spent with a new Frieda poem is a moment of serene peace...and in the midst of those moments, the world is a more beautiful place...xo

[Frieda P]

You blew me away with this review Steve...can't thank you enough for your continued support and kind words always my sweet friend. You truly humble me. xo

[kublakhan27]

You're deserving of every word my dear...xo

[Frieda P]

Consider yourself 'squishy' hugged right now. ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

I'm considering it, and smiling ;) xo

[therisa]

Thank you, Frieda, I needed this poem, badly, as things have been very emotional, for me. To remind me, there more than the negative energy, I am experiencing, to life.

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you found it to be hopeful therisa, thanks so much.

[therisa]

Your welcome, Frieda, Now, only if you can share with me, the secret to falling asleep. My insomnia is brutal over the past 2 days.

[Frieda P]

You're talking to the wrong person, I don't sleep well either, I usually write poetry at 3 AM!

[therisa]

You have my condolence, about your lack of sleep, too. Find 2 am is, a great time for my writing.

[Jack...]

This one touched me...can't hear the music, but "Why can't we be friends" by War, came to mind as I read this today. I would like to sit here and say I am surprised, but there is nothing surprising at all to me that you just keep coming up with one beautiful poem after another. At this point, it would only surprise me if you didn't.

You are amazing Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Leo, My Secret Life, but why didn't I think of that one?! Thanks so much Jack, now that you put the kibosh on my poetry. ;-)

[Jack...]

Yeah, like that would ever happen...I don't know where you buy your pens but there are always filled with the most beautiful ink.

[writ rajat]

the mail that you had leave out in this poem I receive through my heart

[Frieda P]

Thanks for reading writ, muchly appreciated.

[writ rajat]

mention not you deserve it

[Simran Kewlani]

I didn't understand the central idea of this poem. Can you explain please? :(

[Frieda P]

It's about everyone getting along Simran, stitching up the holes in our universe and having some peace at last...

[Simran Kewlani]

Oh okay. It's kinda weird that I didn't understand a poem with such a basic meaning. I feel horrible.

[Frieda P]

That's okay, I guess my delivery is kind of weird, but I hardly ever make sense. ;-) Or so my kids say....

[Simran Kewlani]

No. Maybe I'm not mature enough to understand the poem.