Bled out on paper ~

She bled out on paper without further ado

her scribbles a bitter grain of salty relief 

pen'd of pain's aggregated improper memoirs

inky passages of another rhyme and place

in darkly hue'd testimonials without grace

haunting manifestations affecting destiny's flight

ferocious plight of rushing struck wind gusts

embracing sensitivities' frozen swept notions 

stormy affectations manifested of undue time

gray'd acceptance in blood's purifying ritual 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

My sweet poet, you can bleed your wonderful words on paper, cardboard or even the side of a building with a spray can and it will always be the most beautiful poetry anyone has ever seen. This was a bit sad but so very beautiful and thought provoking.

I believe that all of us as poets bleed our deepest darkest feelings each time we take pen in hand...the ink becomes our blood. However speaking only for myself...I may bleed words but not near as beautifully as you do. You are amazing and I am so fortunate to have the opportunity to read you.

[Frieda P]

Ahh I have too, napkins, whatever is available if I'm out and about, thanks so much Jack!

[kublakhan27]

Again, I am awestruck...your words are like the height limit sign for a circus ride...your imagination must be this ambitious and fearless if you wish to take this ride. Salty relief, dark testimonials, haunting manifestations...and somehow a gray'd acceptance perseveres at the end like a reward for surviving the haunted house...but rest assured, as soon as I'm out of that house I'm right back at the end of the line ready for another go at it...of course, being 5'2", I had to stuff my sneakers a bit to satisfy the sign's requirement ;) But for your sweet hauntings, it's worth the risk...xo

[Frieda P]

Okay Benji, smiled all the way through this review, 'circus ride'....ha, that's a first for me! Larf'd out loud about the sneakers ;-P Grazie mille! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I thought you might get a kick out of that ;) Always a pleasure Mrs.R..xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful poem about a poet doing what they do best writing.
I enjoyed reading this. Short simple but a lovely write.
Written out well and it has a few great rhymes in there.
Im sure allot of people can relate to this piece.
Great write :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much cimmy, it's easy to bleed out to her music, jazz'd you enjoyed. :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your most welcome :) I sure did :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Real writer and artist will bleed. Powerful and strong description made the poem take life and create visions and thoughts. Many kinds of purifying rituals. Words are one. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Indeed our words can be a purifying ritual, thanks so much Coyote.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we bleed out on paper till there is nothing of us left.
and then others finally notice.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words jacob.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes our emotions we express falls on deaf ears of the ones we love and count on to be there, it happens enough is when our feelings bleed out till our soul becomes deathly cold.

[Frieda P]

Your review gave me a chill, so true Dale, thanks so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I hope that was a good chill, you are welcome Moonbeam