~ diabolical dreams

my diabolical dreams

haunting me whilst awake

screaming in head's deliverance 

venturing into comic disbelief 

mind ticks of dread'd consciousness

truth comes in nightmare's relief

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I couldn't help but equate the dream you speak of to a common misery we all brave through some time or another, which is the sorrow from the aftermath of a heartbreak. Truth comes when the nightmare ends and you are able to evaluate things rationally for what they truly are.
Terrifying nonetheless how nightmares are often as real as our dreams, and how they manipulate our judgment very easily.

[Frieda P]

I like where you took this one Tai, thanks for your thoughts.

[Cassie]

Me love this you know i enjoy your work.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Cassie...

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, Frieda. :-o Amazing write.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed Kazie. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

All good. ;-)

[Tom]

I love the dishevelment and chaos in this wild surreal world you have created here Frieda !

Insanity, profanity and profoundly, poetically resplendent!! ( great accompanying soundtrack too )

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coach! :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

From poem to font to song, this one is a hit. You knew I would like it.

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance! Grazie...

[Madalyn Beck]

What a chilling read! This is a fantastic write about the mind and how there really is no escaping our mental state. Hope to see more soon! :)

[Frieda P]

No, there's no escaping it, seems so, thanks so much Madalyn!

[RichGee]

Wow Frieda, this piece is very Edgar Allen Poe-ish...
Sometimes nightmares are tame when compared to ones reality.
You are amazing...like a prize fighter, you throw punches from all angles.

[Frieda P]

Woo Poe and a prizefighter, best review evah! Thanks so much Rich...

[RichGee]

My pleasure

[Brittany Zedalis]

I love that band. Great song to go with this poem. Fits wonderfully.

I love this entire poem. I can't stand nightmares, though they're usually what I have for some reason.

[Frieda P]

I hear you, me too Brittany, its produced many a poem, thanks muchly.

[Scott Metro]

hah..spooky...
Torment...well I don't think it's deserved..but what do I know...
Enjoyed the suffering.
Scotty

[Frieda P]

Hmm what's that supposed to mean Scotty dear, deserved? ....jazz'd you enjoyed the suffering you crazy wolfman...

[Scott Metro]

No..lol...not deserved..just enjoyed the write..!!!
Scotty

[Frieda P]

Ha I think you changed your review you sneak ;-P

[Scott Metro]

No...it was a compliment..I understood and could taste the suffering..therefore it was written well...therefore I enjoyed the suffering..don't you know wolf logic..???...lol

[Frieda P]

Rolling my eyes at you, yes, I'm starting to get it, now I'm in big trouble haha

[Scott Metro]

Now you're warped too...lol

[Frieda P]

Oh I was always warp'd, now your evil is wearing off too ha ;-)

[Scott Metro]

hah..good for you..give you a new perspective...lol

[Frieda P]

I was hoping for one with a more positive twist to it ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Want some cheese with your whine...?? :)

[Frieda P]

I take my whine straight up, tyvm. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Straight up...hah..for the first half hour..then it's prone....lol

[paddy d daly]

reminds me of me when I am half awake and half asleep, don't even want to think about nightmares, god knows where they might lead, nice insight though.....

[Frieda P]

Grazie irish, exactly my sentiments....

[Cryingkate]

too good closed my eyes.........

[Frieda P]

Oi, must be difficult to read that way Connie, ;-) Grazie!

[Cryingkate]

NAw I gots me a Third Eye ! :-)

[Cryingkate]

Got even the music scares the craps out of me

[Frieda P]

Ha put yer big girl pants on hon ;-)

[Cryingkate]

I can't ! It scares me bloomers right off me