Wildflowers on Fire ~

I inhale you,

swept away

like wildflowers on fire

essentia of your sweet burn

in frenzied obstinacy

pulsating my being,

easing into my enraptur'd soul

Your manhood ~

swelling of unspoken desires

sweet lavish abundance

flows through me 

as elation's crystalline, 

  pearlized pools of clarity,

symphonies burst into exhilaration

sun & moon rise simultaneous

melted in your rush

aside  sea's crashing  thunder,

lulled into an exhaustion of

a spent fury's

  powerful embrace

I breathe the essence

within your crest'd glory,

exhaling

smoky

 tears 

ravish'd ~

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

OH MY.....smoky scintillating sensuality!! This kraken steals your breath and fills the body with toe curling splendor. I'm sighing all over your words...and the warmth I feel isnt a fever. Ha.... love this doesnt even come close...more like I'm entranced by the scent of your burning floral lust! Mmmm...mmm....going in my favorites!!

100 wildflowers in full bloom...;-)xo

[Frieda P]

Oh wooo, dancing to your review my sweet friend, so glad this gave you some kind of fever ;-) Grazie for the wildflowers you know I'm just a nutter for those. Mwah xo

[redflutterby]

Lol....and I'm nutters for making you dance!! Shake it...shake it...whoot whoot...go Frieda...go Frieda!!

Ha..delirious with fever... ;-ppxo

[ron]

Beautiful. Full of passion and desire. Making love at this level is beyond the stars and the moon.

[Frieda P]

I'll agree with you there ron, thanks muchly...

[ron]

Your welcome Frieda. I need to look for some stars and the moon, I haven't found them yet, do you know the way?

[Lydia Shutter]

Enticing, seductive, filled with carnal desire...Wooooohoooooo! This one sizzles off the page with incredible imagery, Frieda. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille my sweet friend...

[Sami Khalil]

Even romance is sweating bloody bullets after reading this. Enchanting and feverish...:)..................

[Frieda P]

Oh my, bloody bullets, that's some kind of sweet sweat eh? ;-) Grazie mille Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. ( you don't like wild horses so I came up with an alternative...lol in a good way...You are welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha that's unicorns I don't like, I could find a soft spot for wild horses haha ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:).......................

[Jack...]

And when I exhale this morning I see nirvana rising from the darkness, touching every inch of my weary mind, exciting each fiber of my thoughts and whispering sweet phrases to my dreams. Of every beauty I see there is more loveliness than one could imagine. Indeed I breathe, I breathe your words, I breathe your smile and I breathe you...on this very fragrant and breath trapping journey.

Always amazing my friend...always beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Woo stirring review Jack, thanks muchly...always appreciate your ever poetic responses...

[Arthur Henn]

Wonderful! The title caught my eye...

"like wildflowers on fire"

The above line is superb as is the whole poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Arthur, think you could get me a photo of that one? ;-)

[Arthur Henn]

Hummm! Let's see, bout ready to shut the eyes... I'll search for the inception of wild flower fire dreams.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a plan, sweet dreams...

[Kristina Moulaison]

You create such works of art....this is really lovely!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind words Kristina!

[00000000000000000000000..]

Omgogh I am glad I am behind on reads :))))))))))))))))) I always get to come read the most awesome of awesomesssssssssssssssssssssss:)))))))))))))))) Wow you painted up something I love to read always:))))))))))))) wonderful job my dear friend:)))))))))))) Song is kickin too:)

[Frieda P]

Wooo glad you enjoy'd this one Jon, thanks muchly ;-)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Smilessssssssssssssssssssssssssss your welcome:))))))))))))))))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very sensual piece, insinuates much, says little....oh love's little secrets....that is a good faith hill video...

too...

nicely done...in your own Frieda kind of way.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words jacob...

[redzone]

whoa!!! smoky and yes, this is the way love is supposed to be... great song embedded Frieda, I think that within the smokiness of romance is the breath we take and the chance to actually embrace another human being.. you capture this tension in your poem and it makes us "fire", or as you so elegantly said it: "swept away/like wildflowers on fire/essentia of your sweet burn/in frenzied obstinacy/pulsating my being," I love this view of love and romance, makes me want to burn in these flames.. It's a down right wonderful, loverly poem and one that I will read many times..

oh, a misspell: first line I think you mean breathE not breath..

[Frieda P]

Gotta love a review that starts with 'whoa'...I'm burning up in your sweet words curt, thanks muchly for this glowing on fire response...thanks for the head's up!