Have your cake....

poetry's sweet tooth scribbles~enjoy, it's Frieday & this one is calorie free. ;-)

Like a cake left out in the rain,

layers of frosted poetry

melding into crevices, flavor'd

of emotion's plum content

and cravings

glazed with sugar'd icing &

tang'd bittersweet pieces,

biting taste of serving's

endless batch of jam,

nectar'd recipes flowing in

satisfying indulgences,

morels of

sweet tooth's poesy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Is there strawberries on that cake? I could really use some right now. I hope this review won't be colored by my current fevered state of mind. You always come up with the most interesting comparisons regarding poetry. A cake left out in the rain is one of the most interesting. Poetry is rarely perfect and precise...at least not the good stuff in my opinion. It drips and melds...flavors mix...textures alter..and sometimes it just isnt pretty. But when you taste it your senses respond in the most extreme ways. You may dance with delight or shake your fists in frustration. Whether you lick your fingers or stomp your feet you still go back for more because you cant resist it. Good thing its calorie free eh??

100 candles for that cake...and napkins, in case things get messy

Going back to sleep now..x

[Frieda P]

Woo you frosted my cake with this one, I like it better than my poem. ;-) You write perdy bits of ice'd chocolate whilst baking feverish. Feel better, thanks muchly Red! x

[redflutterby]

Yeah....my brain gets quite strange when I'm sick. Never know what will happen...frosted your cake eh?? Must be a lot like blowing up your skirt. Your poem is delicious... so no comparison hun. But I'll gladly share a yummy piece with you any day. x working on the feeling better..

[Frieda P]

I knew I shoulda added strawberries to that recipe, drink plenty of fluids and eat cake! ;-)

[Cassie]

mmhhhhh....yummy, I always get to read your frieday messages on monday or tuesday but I always enjoy. Thank you for such a yummy enticing write

[ron]

I don't eat to many sweets but this one was just to tasty not to take a bite.

[s y e]

Probably 'cause you're sweet enough ;-P

[ron]

Aww that's so sweet Sye. No pun intended.

[Lyn Anderson]

a yummy little poetic snack

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you took a nibble.

[s y e]

If it is fat free and chocolate then I will have it! ;-) Actually, who the heck cares, it's the weekend, my diet goes out the window on the weekends, ahahaha. ;-) I loved this, loved how if you read deep enough there is kind of a little twist to it.

Mmmmmm, now I am just after a pudding but I want some cake. Off to see if my Aunt has any. :P x

[Frieda P]

Right, there are no calories, especially on the weekends, feast away noodlebumble! ;-) x

[BlackRose]

Mmm, yummy poetry. Taste every word sugary sweet. :o) Splendid piece.

[Frieda P]

Ha we're serving mimosa's this afternoon, enjoy! Thanks BlackRose.

[BlackRose]

Ooh, I'm there! And surely will be enjoying it. ;o) My pleasure. Your muchly welcome.

[Jack...]

A very sweet offering this morning my dear friend. Desert for breakfast, a sugar rush to get the day going. Life isn't always so sweet it seems but to have the good fortune to stop by and read your delicious work first thing in the morning allows us to forget for a while what is happening around us as we savor each scrumptious bite of your words.

This poem sure did put the frosting on my day.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, jazz' d you enjoyed my sweet indulgences, help yourself ;-) Enjoy your Frieday!