Evanescent moments~

run with the wild horses....

Nourish my spirit, burn my loins from within

   take me to that place I've never been

     free my innermost gratifying

                        flights of reverie

leaping in recklessly with wind's abandon,

  let's do that frenzied tango that lover's do

    if only for an evanescent night's embrace,

                    or a million years

moments are feverishly fleeting

                 as dark drapes are drawn

     you may not know me in the light of dawn 

swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution

         don't let me sway away like wild horses

Author's Note

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Another charming write Frieda...I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly. Obviously your pen runneth over...sometimes mine come and don't seem to stop and then nothing for a time. Bottle whatever that is you drinking and send me some please.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Shirlena, it tries to keep up with my brain I guess, you wouldn't want to share that mess.

[BlackRose]

Wonderful! I hear the wild calling. Wild thing you make my heart sing... ;o) If one let's go, it's gone to maybe never return.

[Frieda P]

Go for it BlackRose....thanks so much.

[Scott Metro]

Let the wild horses run..!!
Life is short.....set it free.
Good write Miss Frieda...adventurous ...
Enjoyed it.
Scotty

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Scott, just steer clear of that kick. ;-) Enjoy your Frieday.

[Scott Metro]

You too...make it a good day...I'll stay out of your hair..that will help...lol
My pleasure..!!
Scotty

[Frieda P]

Promises, promises........... ;-P

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty.......

[Sami Khalil]

Roaming freely, swaying with the wind, climbing mountains, sleeping under the stars. The call of the wild and being free is marvelous in your words. All gratifying...:).................

[Frieda P]

You made it sound even better, thanks muchly Sami! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:).....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Seize the moment indeed my dear Freida who knows what tomorrow will bring and your today sounds very appealing :)

[Frieda P]

Wild horses, I wanna be like you Vidya ;-) Thanks pazzo, muchly appreciated.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are already like me lol hellbound.You are welcome sweet chica :)

[Frieda P]

Oh right, I forgot! haha enjoy your Frieday pazzo. ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Enjoy your Freiday too sweetheart :)

[Frieda P]

Oh you must be sick or something somethin' you're being sweetly sappy. ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey I resent the implication that I am not normally as sweet as syrup lol

[Frieda P]

Did you type that with a straight face cara? haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha almost made it all the way through but I couldn't lol

[A. Amos]

FP on this one I agree with, " Redflutterby" review as I'm also having fever...

Thanks for sharing

[Frieda P]

Depending on what kind of fever, that could be good or bad, stop kissing Red! ;-) I meant grazie mille Amos.....

[A. Amos]

Di nente :)

[Tom]

Oh yes indeed Frieda, live for the moment as tomorrow is promised to none !

Idyllically emancipating, keep letting you hair down girl and blow free with the wind !!

[Frieda P]

Ain't that the truth Tom, thanks so much, always love to hear your thoughts !

[Tom]

benvenuto !

[Jack...]

So very beautiful this early morning. It would take a whole lot more to pull your poetry away from me. You take a moment in time and you color it vividly in our minds, always finding just the right measure of charm to touch our hearts and make us smile.

As for those wild horses...we'll ride them some day.

Another gorgeous poem dear Frieda and I once again am amazed.

[Frieda P]

Truthfully, wild horses scare the bejaysus out of me, but they are magnificent. Jazz'd you enjoyed my early morning romp into fantasy Jack. ;-)

[redflutterby]

"Wild horses couldnt drag me away.." x

I already have a fever and here I find this sensually wild piece calling. Sounds like a heart that wants to run wild and free but not alone. To dance till breathless...touch the face of mad passion..if only just once. But not to get lost in it in the end. Doubt I'm going back to sleep now...the sound of those wild horses has filled my ears. Its a thunderous noise... but one that thrills the heart and calls the soul. Much as living life on the edge does. x

[Frieda P]

'....All I want is the wind in my hair, to face the fear but, not feel scared' Hmmm whoa yea, sounds good to me, it is Frieday after all. Sorry if I disturbed yer sleep Red, not really. ;-) x

[redflutterby]

Is it Frieday...gosh I am delusional!! And you never can resist trying to wake me up..ha... incorrigible....;+pp

[Frieda P]

Happens with a fever, but I hate to break it to ya, you already were. ;-P ha x

[redflutterby]

Ha... NOT!! I'm just guirky... and I have a vivid imagination. Blah...blah..xo

[Frieda P]

Is that similar to quirky or a google search? Go back to bed yakityyak...haha