Evanescent moments~

run with the wild horses....

Nourish my spirit, burn my loins from within

   take me to that place I've never been

     free my innermost gratifying

                        flights of reverie

leaping in recklessly with wind's abandon,

  let's do that frenzied tango that lover's do

    if only for an evanescent night's embrace,

                    or a million years

moments are feverishly fleeting

                 as dark drapes are drawn

     you may not know me in the light of dawn 

swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution

         don't let me sway away like wild horses

Author's Note

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Another charming write Frieda...I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly. Obviously your pen runneth over...sometimes mine come and don't seem to stop and then nothing for a time. Bottle whatever that is you drinking and send me some please.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Shirlena, it tries to keep up with my brain I guess, you wouldn't want to share that mess.

[Einstein Noodle]

though hot and emblazoned ... this one is more tame for you (i think) its gentle .. the way horses stand over their young and each other .. but its wild alright ..like mustangs ... but romantic .. and i like the way you tie time from here to eternity ... i like this one a lot .. thanks for sharing it
E.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Very talented write Frieda, amazing write.

Kaze~

[Aethereal]

This poem of yours is a symbol of that freedom that each of us seeks from within: It inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Wild Bats

Spirits may no longer hide
in those caverns of her mind.
Let them climb those deep and wide
canyon walls as they‘re inclined,
soaring wildly as they glide
seeking what they’re meant to find
hatching hunches in their stride.
Whim and wonder guide the blind.

[Eric Pudalov]

Another great poem, Frieda! I say, must be an amazing guy who can "Nourish my spirit, burn my loins from within/take me to that place I've never been."

You capture quite well that adventurous feeling of a night of passion, that seems endless in the moment, but quickly fades away. There's a twinge of sadness to it too, as in

"you may not know me in the light of dawn
swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution
don't let me sway away like wild horses."

It's as if the adventure and craziness all has to end and fade away at some point. But it can still leave some fond memories, I think.

[Frieda P]

So true, but at least we have those steamy memories in any event, thanks so much Eric....

[Mark]

This one I like. I can follow it and relate. Nicely done.

[Frieda P]

Always appreciate your left handed compliments Mark. ;-) Grazie.....

[Mark]

I happen to be left handed. I hope you don't hold that against me. :P

[Frieda P]

Nah that's not what I hold against you knucklehead haha ;-P

[Brittany Zedalis]

You blew me away with this one. Great job!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Brittany.

[Cassie]

whip whip!!!! you blew me away with this one, I felt like i just ran with wild horses. I need to keep this one

[Frieda P]

Thanks Cassie.

[Claire in VA]

sensationally sensual verses!
I enjoyed the read.
Claire

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Claire, glad you enjoyed this one!

[paddy d daly]

the mystery of the mind remains just that,
''you may not know me in the light of dawn''

[Frieda P]

Exactly, thanks paddy....