Evanescent moments~

Evanescent moments~

A Poem by Frieda P
"

run with the wild horses....

"
Nourish my spirit, burn my loins from within
   take me to that place I've never been
     free my innermost gratifying
                        flights of reverie
leaping in recklessly with wind's abandon,
  let's do that frenzied tango that lover's do
    if only for an evanescent night's embrace,
                    or a million years
moments are feverishly fleeting
                 as dark drapes are drawn
     you may not know me in the light of dawn 
swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution
         don't let me sway away like wild horses


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Another charming write Frieda...I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly. Obviously your pen runneth over...sometimes mine come and don't seem to stop and then nothing for a time. Bottle whatever that is you drinking and send me some please.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Shirlena, it tries to keep up with my brain I guess, you wouldn't want to share that .. read more



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though hot and emblazoned ... this one is more tame for you (i think) its gentle .. the way horses stand over their young and each other .. but its wild alright ..like mustangs ... but romantic .. and i like the way you tie time from here to eternity ... i like this one a lot .. thanks for sharing it
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very talented write Frieda, amazing write.

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem of yours is a symbol of that freedom that each of us seeks from within: It inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Wild Bats

Spirits may no longer hide
in those caverns of her mind.
Let them climb those deep and wide
canyon walls as they‘re inclined,
soaring wildly as they glide
seeking what they’re meant to find
hatching hunches in their stride.
Whim and wonder guide the blind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Another great poem, Frieda! I say, must be an amazing guy who can "Nourish my spirit, burn my loins from within/take me to that place I've never been."

You capture quite well that adventurous feeling of a night of passion, that seems endless in the moment, but quickly fades away. There's a twinge of sadness to it too, as in

"you may not know me in the light of dawn
swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution
don't let me sway away like wild horses."

It's as if the adventure and craziness all has to end and fade away at some point. But it can still leave some fond memories, I think.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

So true, but at least we have those steamy memories in any event, thanks so much Eric....
This one I like. I can follow it and relate. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Always appreciate your left handed compliments Mark. ;-) Grazie.....
Mark

10 Years Ago

I happen to be left handed. I hope you don't hold that against me. :P
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Nah that's not what I hold against you knucklehead haha ;-P
Another charming write Frieda...I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly. Obviously your pen runneth over...sometimes mine come and don't seem to stop and then nothing for a time. Bottle whatever that is you drinking and send me some please.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Shirlena, it tries to keep up with my brain I guess, you wouldn't want to share that .. read more
You blew me away with this one. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Brittany.
whip whip!!!! you blew me away with this one, I felt like i just ran with wild horses. I need to keep this one

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Cassie.
sensationally sensual verses!
I enjoyed the read.
Claire

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Claire, glad you enjoyed this one!
the mystery of the mind remains just that,
''you may not know me in the light of dawn''

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Exactly, thanks paddy....

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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