You are my b'MuSEment...

You're my muse,

you run hot and cold

icy fire 

runs through 

your inky veins

at times you gut me,

like a twitch

 raining in my eyes

flip'd over, 

 warm words resemble

tull'd silk perfection,

sideways again in

darkly cobalt'd hurricane tides

bubbles of recess'd glint

a farsighted  edgy distraction

you give it to me all

from end to beginning sighs

Burbles of wild 

Roddenberry brambles

ramble on

like blistering skies romancing 

a dimwitted  sapphir'd night

 encounters,

stuck shanghaiing 

a lightning

bolt's stagger

fell to earth in a sting

of exasperated bumbl'd bees

you sang off key in the shade

of lemongrass' canopy

hush'd me with a groan of

palm tree fronds in heat

as heart's analogy

melted in a

mellow

 fluff

of

 marshmallow

gooey 

goodness

continuously

 aMUSEd

as you

drip

into

pen'd

consciousness....

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I'll start with the technical bits...inky veins, I love that...and shanghaiing...even I would never think of using that word Mrs.R ;P And of course I love the prominent presence of blue in this piece, cobalt'd, sapphire'd and so on...the presence of blue is always a sure-fire way to my poetic heart ;P

Now for the important points. This is hands-down one of the most eloquent odes to a muse I have ever read, and the rapid popularity that this one has garnered suggests that I'm not alone. This is definitely one for my library...the depth and richness of the emotions in this piece just demands repeated readings. I am truly in awe of this one. And if anyone's muse demands such devotion, it's yours, for she's made you the best poet in the Cafe...I won't speak for anyone else, but you set the standard and raise the bar higher than anyone I can think of in terms of marrying pure emotion and pure imagination. You've done it again love :) xo

[Frieda P]

Didn't notice there was so much blue in this one till you pointed it out...hmm coincidence? ;-) Thanks muchly Benji, you humble me always with your kind words my sweet friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Good thing you have Benji around to notice those things Mrs.R ;) Always a pleasure my dear friend...xo

[LadyAnn68]

VEry nice...it is a beautiful song you picked to go with it! A true work of art with pen an music!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille LadyAnn!

[LadyAnn68]

De nada..mi amor!

[David Scott]

Friends are wonderful when they allow us to see the world through new eyes... It is fun to see the eyes of our friends open up to their own consciousness as well.
Beautiful write Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Scott, I like your take on this one.

[Saddam]

Uncounciously love to read it.
Hmmm.............. wonderfull writing it is.
This is my best day...

[Frieda P]

I think I was unconscious when I wrote it, thanks muchly Ssadd. ;-)

[Saddam]

it is my pleasure... mujhe acha laga padh kar...

[Frieda P]

Thanks, is that the translation?

[Saddam]

mujhe acha laga padh kar
that is hindi words...whenever we found something great we said. It means "I love it through my heart."

[Frieda P]

Oh, I google'd but wouldn't translate, thanks muchly, you just made my heart smile. :-)

[Saddam]

hindi is very sweet language...you can try easily it...it fits any language. But thank you very much.

[Frieda P]

Apparently chrome translate doesn't speak Hindi either....

[Sami Khalil]

"melted in a
mellow
fluff
of
marshmallow
gooey
goodness"

A most flavorful muse in all aspects even in the taste of the mouth. And then your promise to him to give all of you. Whoa. Ans vice versa. A wonderful write...:).............

[Frieda P]

Smiling here, jazz'd you enjoyed my gooey goodness Sami. ;-) Grazie mille............

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome muchly...:)......................

[Jack...]

My oh my...it is 5:43 am and I am now wide awake. This poem wrapped around me like a fine silk scarf, it is colorful and festive like a Mardis Gras parade, smooth and soft as a fluttering wing on a warm breeze and as beautiful as anything these opened eyes have ever seen. I know I have said this many times over but this poem right here may be my all time favorite of yours Frieda. There is something very happy and very pleasing about this. I fashioned a melody in my head as I read this because you know I can not hear the sound...and who needs to...this poem is a song in itself.

Two words I am left with as I finish reading this gem...if only.

Amazing beautiful and inspiring...and so is the poem. :)

[Frieda P]

Perhaps that's where this playful one came from, the idea of Mardi Gras and having fun, who knows where the muse goes at times, thanks so much for your sweet thoughts Jack, muchly appreciated. ;-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Delicate and recited, a playful piece, well done.

[Frieda P]

It was playing about my mind, jazz'd you enjoyed this one Thomas, thanks muchly.

[Avinash]

Have ta say a Muse works like an Ink pot for our pen and guys like us can just feel envy for yours ;)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Avinash, glad you enjoyed :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awesome as ever Freida .Your lines are pure perfection :)

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance, grazie mille pazzo! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have some real moves there chica lol.You are welcome :)

[Frieda P]

Ha it's all that gooey goodness. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yay for gooey goodness :)

[Frieda P]

Goes with your g-string me thinks haha ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yep my g string does tend to precede gooey goodness lol

[Frieda P]

Lucky you I'd say or him, whatever....just keep up the good work haha ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes Freida I'm all about keeping UP the good work lol

[Frieda P]

Ha you knew exactly where I was going with that, twisted minds and all that jazz ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah two peas in a pod :)

[Frieda P]

Cheers, we really need to have a drink together, or two. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

or three or four or ten.Cheers my darling bottoms up :)

[Frieda P]

Salut! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Salut!!!!!! :)

[B-poet]

A fantastic & fabolous write Frieda. Loved the overall thematic message you've conveyed so poetically well here. Greak work. A unique & unforgettable read. :)

[Frieda P]

Ahha, I read 'Greek work'....I know it was a typo now, but yep...Greek to me too sometimes, thanks muchly Bpoet ;-)