Fickl'd Cravings

I have seen you in your divine graciousness

         & around darkly color'd spaces

I've tasted your exquisite nectar upon my tongue

          and felt the tang of your bitterness

Have craved your heat'd breath upon my skin

           felt your fickle chill'd shoulder upon my nape

We've aligned in perfect harmonious rhyme

             falter'd in our symmetry of authenticity

Been caught under your gray hurricane storm clouds 

              soaked in your light amber'd wash of rays

Dust particles 'tween our here and there

                 prance amidst our equilibrium, 

Knocking my heart off balance,

           tho' letting me land unto a soft haven

      Even when wildly sideways steps 

                         stomp me dead in my tracks

      Our tango'd dance of non-stop capricious whirling

                     still flips my world  upside down    

Author's Note

captcha~egomism

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You certainly know how to bring a dance to life on paper Mrs.R, or the monitor if you will haha There is often a hint at danger too, a suggestion that there may be more to the partner in question...but when a man knows how to dance, that seems to make all the potential danger worthwhile ;) Lines eight and nine were swooners for sure. My name's going on your dance card for sure, and I'm bringing the grey hurricane with me ;) xo

[Frieda P]

You should see the smile on my face right now Benji. ;-D....love this review, you blew my skirt up. Dancing to your words and the thought of gray hurricanes. ;-) Grazie! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Well you should see mine ;D Glad I could get your feet moving Mrs.R, and your mind too ;)

[Avinash]

Such a perfect setup for a romantic eve. Intoxicating words...m already in the dream land.
And thank you for penning it down. :)

[Frieda P]

Oh I love 'intoxicating' thanks so much for this glowing review Avinash. ;-)

[A. Amos]

Wonderful rhyme and creativity! Well done my friend! :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille A, muchly appreciated. :-)

[Saddam]

Very intresatingly romance.
A dance with all heart,
Beautiful image created by your poetry in mind dear.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Ssadd.

[Scott Metro]

Very romantic Miss Frieda.
You must be spent all the time..lol..sounds like it.
Wonderful urgings here.

Scott

[Frieda P]

Ha why do you think I drink so much coffee? ;-) Grazie mille....

[Scott Metro]

:)
I know...I know

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well relationships are rife with ups and downs and we wouldn't have it any other way.Scooby doo waffles and all that jazz eh chica :)

[Frieda P]

Haha exactly, if we don't laugh at the dizzy spells, we'd go daft, thanks so much pazzo. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my dear :)