Feather'd a rouge poem~

You planted wildflowers 

for my hair

 swept me off my feet,

gingerly feather'd 

a rouge poesy

in the shape of my heart

sang a song of tea 

unfurl'd in

honey'd rapturous charm,

nuzzl'd 'tween my breasts 

a note, pen'd of love

shades of lusty interludes

 unfold'd within poignant caresses

press'd poppies' poetry

crimson rosebuds and wisteria 

in blissful whisper's bloom,

cast in heaven's sighs

impassioned fire 

a'blaze 

~in foolish ecstasy 

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

the Cyndi Lauper song is amazing, it in my head now swimming around and giving me smilies behind my eyelids... (I know the brain does amazing things sometimes.. at mine does)... oh and the POEM... I wanted to say something about those ecstasies (foolish as all get out) but everyone has mentioned them.. so.. leading up to those last lines, you colored the world with: "crimson rosebuds and wisteria
in blissful whisper's bloom, /cast in heaven's sighs" and besides the sigh I said out loud, I thought, yes Frieda, "impassioned fire / a'blaze" and I remembered a Dianna Ross song that went something like "If there's a cure for this, I don't want it", don't call the Dr."... you know, this is another poem I think your were smiling, laughing and giddy all over as the pen moved your hands (and perhaps heart as well).. perhaps you were thinking of another Cyndi song : "Girls Just Wanna Have Fun"... lol. But Frieda its a romantically fresh, wonderfully sweet smelling (all them flowers in your hair) and muchly appreciated poem .. Ha my proof.. look at all the loverly comment you got .... you are one special poet/woman Frieda.. X

[Frieda P]

Woo your poetic words blew me away Curt, thanks muchly my sweet friend. :-) x

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You and that pen move wonderfully together.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Travis, jazz'd to see you on my page again. ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I'm trying to make a slow return. Lol

[Frieda P]

Whichever way you wanna do it, it's good with me, just come back. ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

You make me smile way to easily, Frieda. ;)

[Frieda P]

Geez I wish that spell worked in real life ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I'm sure it does... At least on me it would. I'm a sucka for a pretty smile. ;)

[Scott Metro]

nuzzle'd 'tween my breasts ......that sounds comfortable...lol
Love Cyndi Lauper BTW.
A warm and romantic write...kudos.
Enjoyed it.
Scotty

[Frieda P]

As long as the thorns are off the rose, thanks muchly Scott. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Boy...you're tying my hands here...lol

[Saddam]

You planted wildflowers
for my hair
That is very nice poem. Love it.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Ssadd, glad you enjoyed this one.