Feather'd a rouge poem~

You planted wildflowers 

for my hair

 swept me off my feet,

gingerly feather'd 

a rouge poesy

in the shape of my heart

sang a song of tea 

unfurl'd in

honey'd rapturous charm,

nuzzl'd 'tween my breasts 

a note, pen'd of love

shades of lusty interludes

 unfold'd within poignant caresses

press'd poppies' poetry

crimson rosebuds and wisteria 

in blissful whisper's bloom,

cast in heaven's sighs

impassioned fire 

a'blaze 

~in foolish ecstasy 

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

the Cyndi Lauper song is amazing, it in my head now swimming around and giving me smilies behind my eyelids... (I know the brain does amazing things sometimes.. at mine does)... oh and the POEM... I wanted to say something about those ecstasies (foolish as all get out) but everyone has mentioned them.. so.. leading up to those last lines, you colored the world with: "crimson rosebuds and wisteria
in blissful whisper's bloom, /cast in heaven's sighs" and besides the sigh I said out loud, I thought, yes Frieda, "impassioned fire / a'blaze" and I remembered a Dianna Ross song that went something like "If there's a cure for this, I don't want it", don't call the Dr."... you know, this is another poem I think your were smiling, laughing and giddy all over as the pen moved your hands (and perhaps heart as well).. perhaps you were thinking of another Cyndi song : "Girls Just Wanna Have Fun"... lol. But Frieda its a romantically fresh, wonderfully sweet smelling (all them flowers in your hair) and muchly appreciated poem .. Ha my proof.. look at all the loverly comment you got .... you are one special poet/woman Frieda.. X

[Frieda P]

Woo your poetic words blew me away Curt, thanks muchly my sweet friend. :-) x

[kublakhan27]

Not sure if you're going to San Fransisco anytime soon Mrs.R, but don't forget those flowers for your hair...actually it's never a bad time for flowers in your hair, I quite enjoy that look on a woman, but you didn't just read that ;P The progression from flowers to fire here is a pretty strong metaphor...it kind of reflects how the lovemaking process should go right? Yes, you can see what this piece did to my head...my imagination is quite giddy as I take in this little foray into the ultimate ecstasy. No honey necessary in my tea when you're around...you appear to have all the honey that is required ;P I'd normally be a little less gushing in my reviews but since Mrs.R refuses to blush, I have nothing to lose by getting it all out haha Every poem you write is a poignant caress my dear :) xo

[Frieda P]

'Flowers to fire' I quite like that Benji, there's a poem in there somewhere. ;-) Love it when you gush dear, gush away, I'm loving it. ;-) Grazie mille. xo

[Tom]

Enchanting and so appropriate given that the new season is upon us !

A soulful, poetic rhapsody, bello Frieda !

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Captain, appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

Those poignant caresses are so important to message the hearts and minds. To couple them with love bug's ecstacy. A double whammy...Bravo..........

[Frieda P]

Smiling here 'love bug's ecstasy', love that Sami, thanks muchly :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome muchly...:).....................

[Ai Lun]

The gliding nature of this poem is flawless and almost sends the reader to a new world with the imagery. Well done Frieda!!! :)

[Frieda P]

*Smiling* here....wow, thanks so much for your kind words, I'm truly humbled my friend.

[Ai Lun]

You're welcome. I only say what is deserved :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww Freida you are such a versatile writer .G strings one minute love and romance the next.I wanna be you when I grow up lol

[Frieda P]

Scooby doo doo waffles, you don't wanna go there, believe me! Besides you're Peter Pan, you ain't never growing up. ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh yeah I forgot.It is very bad when you become the voice of reason lol

[s y e]

I love how when I am feeling blue and down all I need to do us ready you and waala, here I am smiling again. This was extremely beautiful and romantic. Again, you've left me speechless and wanting more.

Great job as ever... flip flop & all that jazz xo

[Frieda P]

Awh you're too sweet peanut, glad it turned your frown upside down. :-) Mwah! xo

[s y e]

No bother, you know it.

[ron]

This is not a foolish ecstasy. It is romance and love wrapped in lustful dreams of passion.
Very beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Woo I like that sentiment ron, thanks muchly.

[ron]

You are most welcome Frieda.

[Jack...]

I am definitely ready for some foolish ecstacy, I will say. Soothing, this sensual piece moved soft across my mind like a warm breeze caressing the visions conjured up on this winter day. A beautiful and enticing poetic bouquet you have penned today my sweet friend. May there always be fragrant wildflowers for your hair and enchanting poetry flowing from your pen.

So much beauty finds me today...

[Frieda P]

Don't we all act as fools when the love bug hits us smack on? Thanks Jack, I'm hoping for fragrant wildflowers myself. Love an 'enticing poetic bouquet' know a flower shop where they sell those? ;-)

[Jack...]

Sure do, and they deliver...but only if you order by the gazillion.

[Frieda P]

Ha of course, you can't just have one, it's like those chips. ;-)

[Jack...]

You mean, Lays? Hmmmmmmm

[Frieda P]

Yep.....salt and vinegar preferably.

[redflutterby]

Feeling down and disheartened I thought i'd come read one of your poems. And here I find a warm sultry piece...in shades of my favorite color. The picture is magnificent..the song divine and the words transcending. It brought to mind Paris... walking the streets amongst love struck couples. The air heavy with the scent of flowers and decadent food...and strawberries... (ive got those on the brain always!). This is one of my favorites..

100 rouge smiles... x

[Frieda P]

Awh, thanks so much Red, glad it made you feel a wee bit better. I love where you took this one, Paris is perfect in my mind. :-) Grazie xo

[redzone]

Hi Red, me butting in, red(obnoxiousasever)zone, hoping you are a "wee bit better".. please accept my good wishes as well... and as the doctor said, read more of this poem from Frieda... ;o)

[redflutterby]

Youre welcome hun...xo

Curt....thank you for the kind words...it means the world to me. You are a sweet wonderful man. xo