Jazz'd brilliance ~

Poetry's Bliss

Jazz me with your brilliance.

take me on a magic carpet ride

trip the light fantastic with your moves

script a rant or wax poetic

as long as there's passion,

blissful harmony of wine, wildflowers & song

intoxication of rapturous conjugation,

words set to reason, rhythm and rhyme

meditations, observations, consternations,

highlights of synchronized times of our lives

allure of history's past, present and future 

poetry is the spice of life, let it shine

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This was quite the elegant portrayal of poetry itself and the way it dances within each soul uniquely, differently, never perfectly in tune with another although two might be similar. I also relish the way you speak of the various tones of poetry, and mentioning how it could be written of the past, present, or future depending on the poet. Intriguing, I must say. That last line was killer as well!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed this one Tai.

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning hun...as always, enjoyed :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tia, jazz'd you did. :-) x

[s y e]

Waaw, this brightened up my rainy, dull day my little Pickle... lawl. Seriously though, I absolutely adore this piece. I think it's excellently writte as always and beautifully structured. You blow me away with your utterly gorgeous and breathtaking poetry.

Fluffy socks & all that jazz xo

[Frieda P]

Awh noodlebumble, seems to be that kind of day, jazz'd I could bring a bright spot. Thanks so much peanut. xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

beautiful, deep and written from the heart.
I liked this piece has deep emotion and meaning, you put allot of thought into it.
It flows and comes together quite well to.
Great write :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much cimmy, jazz'd you enjoyed. :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice imagery, like the use of jazz as a verb that is later used as a leitmotiv...

[Frieda P]

Grazie Leslie, learned something new, I never heard of a leitmotiv, thank you.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

The way you write is Extra-Ordinary and on the top of it the selection of the song.. Wow.. Simply Wow.. :-)

Good Wishes!!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review, muchly appreciated P...hope you don't mind, that's one heck of a pen name. ;-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is the spice of life, Frieda....and your poetry is extra spicy...

"you don't know what we can find, why don't you come with me little girl, on a magic carpet ride" (steppenwolf)

[Frieda P]

I do love extra spice jacob, thanks so much....

[Cassie]

You jazzed me here, how have you been? I have been on and off Wc, i have quite a lot of RRS will try to read at least 10 in a day. Have a super monday. Hugs

[Frieda P]

Hope all is well Cassie, you've been missed, thanks so much my friend. xo

[Baby Ricochet]

I can be brilliant, once in a while.

[Frieda P]

When did you get so modest Baby?

[B-poet]

A lovely and classy Frieda. Loved the photo you chose to depict every visual element needed in order to bring your well chosen title to life. Excellent work. An fine & enchanting read. :)

[Frieda P]

That's how I picture myself whilst reading poetry, only someone else is feeding me the grapes haha, thanks so much Bpoet. ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Poetry is all that and a bag of chips! A poem can make a dull day bright and can change the attitude of the poet...not to mention the reader! The past and present are tied together with your wonderful imagery. Unique and so lovely! Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Ha true, sometimes the bag of chips gets messy though, thanks so much Lydikey, muchly appreciate your thoughts always.