Reverie's Echo

Thanks noodlebumble for the inspiring graphic ♥

A thought captivated me,

upon reverie's echoes

 like a lovely dream

feelings that linger'd long after

the wind touched my face 

in a tender embrace of yesterday

a discernible hush,

 of a whisper in my ear

  caressed my heart

   as it took flight,

fragrance of wildflowers

 in my hair

   scent of silk and satin sheet nights

of when our shores crash'd,

musky reminiscent

of fond

remembrances

you said goodbye ~

I learn'd to fly, after a time

 when

 you were still mine

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful places you took me with in your words.
"fragrance of wildflowers
in my hair
scent of silk and satin sheet nights
of when our shores crash'd,"
The above lines were my favorite. Sweet and kind places and memories are always with us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, glad you enjoy'd my wildflower musings.

[ms. barrie]

Frieda once again, you're gift for words never ceases to amazes me!

The imagery portrayed here is spellbinding...that takes one away on a flight of
romantic fancies with the wind. hell i have no idea what i am saying, this is just utterly
gorgeous! I love the music as well as the artwork...incredibly penned, but
i am not surprised! now i fell back down to earth :( LOL -- thank you for sharing!

pockets this into my favorites...just breath-taking!

[Frieda P]

Ha it's Frieday night, no one knows what they're saying. You humble me with your kind words Barrie, thanks so much, I appreciate that you didn't hurt yourself when you fell back haha x

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome Frieda, This poem is one of my favorites from you, it's a gorgeous
gem. I very much enjoyed being taken away! Apologies if my reviews upon your writes
always seem redundant! And i enjoy letting your words swirl around in me head
(need them to) before i can gather my thoughts.

[Jack...]

This is so very soft Frieda. Like snuggling up beneath a down comforter on a cold winter night in front of a roaring fire, a couple of glasses of wine...with someone you love. This flows upon the eyes in a soothing manner, whispering the sweetest words one could ever hear.

Beautiful my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Ahh sounds cozy Jack, jazz'd it took you there, thanks so much.

[s y e]

Woo, look what my little piccie inspired? ;-) I love how all you need to do is look at a picture and away you go, off on this wonderful journey and you let us come to. Like a magic carpet ride. This is truly magnificent. I cannot fault it at all - wouldn't want to. You just write with such sophistication and beauty and your heart is in every word. I love how you wrote this.

The music goes superbly with this one... But it's your words that hooked and reeled me in and left me never wanting to go off your page, never wanting to leave this beautiful world you have created. The story and everything. How do you always ace it? Honestly, Mama F, I want to be like you when I am older.

// fragrance of wildflowers
in my hair
scent of silk and satin sheet nights
of when our shores crash'd, //

Your imagery is so vivid. It is like a movie playing on my computer screen... a movie that I never want to end. I am blown away and you have left me speechless. You're truly magnificent.

I think you do need stilettos for this one, stuff the snow! 100 huggles, stilettos & all that jazz! xo

[Frieda P]

Blown away by your review sweet Sye, I have no words really. You made my night, my entire weekend actually! Muchly appreciated peanut, feel in love with the image you sent and it swept me away. Thanks again for always thinking of me noodlebumble, you're the best...ha lovin' the stiletto's, hope they're red ones!! ♥♥

[LadyAnn68]

OMG this is total beauty...just delicious! Written with excellence...I shall keep this one and add to my library! Truely inspiring, I could feel the wind on my face....

[Frieda P]

Wow, you just brought a huge smile to my face LadyAnn, thanks so much...love that you 'felt' it.

[LadyAnn68]

Me too! Excellent music too!