Reverie's Echo

Thanks noodlebumble for the inspiring graphic ♥

A thought captivated me,

upon reverie's echoes

 like a lovely dream

feelings that linger'd long after

the wind touched my face 

in a tender embrace of yesterday

a discernible hush,

 of a whisper in my ear

  caressed my heart

   as it took flight,

fragrance of wildflowers

 in my hair

   scent of silk and satin sheet nights

of when our shores crash'd,

musky reminiscent

of fond

remembrances

you said goodbye ~

I learn'd to fly, after a time

 when

 you were still mine

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful places you took me with in your words.
"fragrance of wildflowers
in my hair
scent of silk and satin sheet nights
of when our shores crash'd,"
The above lines were my favorite. Sweet and kind places and memories are always with us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, glad you enjoy'd my wildflower musings.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too...well written.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Leslie...

[Einstein Noodle]

her hands are in tenuto .... and your poem is so graceful ... floating ... serene ... peaceful ... a memory to hold out to its full length ... i feel so pleasant ... nice one Frieda
E.

[Frieda P]

Oooh like minds and all that jazz, just use'd tenuto in a poem....I'm floating serenely in your review, thanks muchly my sweet friend...

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning..wonderfully put together, really enjoyed :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tia, jazz'd you enjoyed this one. :-) x

[Michael G. Smith]

When the most breath taking pieces I've read in quite a while.

[Frieda P]

Enthralled by your review Michael, thanks so much.

[Shirlena]

Tried to add this one to my Library but my computer is stuck on stupid right now...coming back for it though :).

[Frieda P]

Don't ya hate when that happens, I thought this damn things were supposed to be smarter than us..............

[Shirlena]

Yeah well you know humans did create them and as much we hate to admit it we got a dent and so...

[Frieda P]

Dents, is that what they're calling em these days.........

[Shirlena]

LOL cracks, scratches, dings, crazy...your choice

[Frieda P]

E ~ I'll go with all of the above haha

[Shirlena]

Now you might not see this but this is a very sexy write...I'll have to go back and read it again and clarify all the spots that made it such but there are many. If I quoted them it would be half the poem. That sent a chill up my back. Excellent.

[Frieda P]

Woo, jazz'd if it blew your skirt up a few times Shirlena, muchly appreciated.

[Scott Metro]

Love Enya BTW.
Very pleasant write..nothing heavy...refreshing.
A fine write Frieda.....

Scott

[Frieda P]

Me too, she puts me in a mellow mood, thanks Scott.

[Scott Metro]

Indeed my dear...!!!

[m.s.early]

tender and gentle dear poet. you move your readers in a gentle sway and make me wonder if those that said good bye were fools :)

[Frieda P]

Ha yep it was them, always their fault, never mine of course. ;-) Thanks so much xavier.

[paddy d daly]

god woman, you remind of a poem, something that heaney wrote about builders,''the pharahos brickyards were building in their heads'', someones pen is burning in your head, I will review though, just give me time....

[Frieda P]

I don't think I know that one....thanks for reading paddy.

[paddy d daly]

I will check it out and let you know, it's from '' the spirit level'', i'm sure, do you know that one, it has a lovely poem called St. Kevin and the blackbird.

[Frieda P]

Ahh I think I do, haven't read it in ages, forgotten self, something like that.............

[paddy d daly]

yeah that's it, forgotten self, forgotten bird, and on the riverbank forgotten the rivers name, or is that it, if not I have forgotten how to remember;)

[Frieda P]

Ha join the club... ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so mellow and touches me deeply Lady F .

[Frieda P]

Woo new title...I'm digging it. ;-) Grazie mille...........

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha you know that F could stand for anything lol

[Frieda P]

LOL, you nailed me with that one!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Good I feel so proud to say I nailed you chica hahaa rofl :)

[Frieda P]

I'm keeping a close Italiano evil eye on you now...haha ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahahaha ...............:)