Bodacious nectar'd' candy ~

Bodacious nectar'd' candy ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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figgy puddin' ladyfingers

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Bodacious ginger'd candied poetry

still life of Monet's marmalade art

dark cherry wine lingerie

Beethoven's flair of symphony

surrendered in your rapture

submitted to your every whim

 bondage and silky wraps 

rapid rhythmic rhyming beats

reverberate breathing sparks

painted Daliesque posies

silent echoes of dark apparitions

ocean swells anointing bliss

moon tides sacred kiss,

nature's chromatic dust

pink pearlized polka dots

intoxicating kaleidoscopic eyes

reflections of butterfly hues

darkly encapsulated horror

naked souls, weeping spirits

sculpted iridescent rainbows

brazen relished heart's desire

rubik's cube algorithm mind games

wrap'd in figgy puddin' ladyfingers 

tickling traces in bold context

power of words compels us, 
cure for anything at all,
  salty sea breezes
& poetry ~





© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P


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Graphic~Mary Fox, Reverie

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What a magnifcence of words! This is a mix of emotion and experience, the looking into rather than just looking at. Your word use is just breathtaking, near muddle of legend and idiom.. tis astounding, one of the best of your very best and how many those are!

'.. darkly encapsulated horror ~ naked souls, weeping spirits ~ sculpted iridescent rainbows ~ brazen relished heart's desire ~ rubik's cube algorithm mind games ~ wrap'd in figgy puddin' ladyfingers .. '

In an intensely thoughtful way, you've re-interpreted the canvas.. magical!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wow petulia, you knocked me off my chair with this one, thanks so much Emma, you humble me with your.. read more
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Beautiful review, Emma! This is almost as wonderful as the poem itself; in fact, you helped me writ.. read more



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After reading this, I feel like I have been relishing a lollilop, that has a cherry strawberry taste....This words, tell us with Arzel if your chewed and swallowed the dictionary or are you the one who made it....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Funny lady you. ;-) Don't be encouraging that teenage nutter now! Thanks so much Cassie, always lov.. read more
Cassie

10 Years Ago

hahahaha....yes mademoiselle, I wont encourage her no more...Arzel, see I have been warned, I don't .. read more
Blue

10 Years Ago

Mothernutter, you have no authority over people who love me!!! :P :P
It often amazes me how you aptly and creatively choose adjectives to adorn your poetry, mothernutter... Are you sure you haven't swallowed the dictionary? I'll leave the scholarly reviews to people like Emma... ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cassie

10 Years Ago

here we say...old is gold...lol. have a fab evening you two
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Here we say 'old as dirt' haha
Blue

10 Years Ago

I bought that book, of course I'm not giving up on it. ;) And Cassie, you're funny. :P
This poem enraptured me in its magnificent contents, and the way it portrays relaxation as a cure-all to any ills that might befall the intellectual. Not only is it the medicine that gets us out of bad times, but 'tis also the candy we enjoy to indulge in. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I love this review Tai, exactly my sentiments, thanks so much.
bondage and silky wraps
rapid rhythmic rhyming beats
reverberate breathing sparks

Beautiful....Increase my rhythmic beat and sound and then a spark came on it

ocean swells anointing bliss
moon tides sacred kiss,
nature's chromatic dust

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ssadd, glad you enjoyed my musings.
Saddam

10 Years Ago

of course i'm. thanks a lot dear.
ocean swells anointing bliss
moon tides sacred kiss,

I have to say it; this poem was delicious. Can anyone say word-candy.

Ps. I caught you rhyming again;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Say it isn't so ;-) ...ha, love 'word -candy'. Thanks so much Pryde.
Sea breezes, poetry, and something sweet - yes, I'd say those cure just about everything! This poem tingles the taste buds and awakens the mind's eye - love it, Frieda!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Amazing poetry my writer friend. I had to read again for the pleasure of the words. Good places and visions create by your strong description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, muchly appreciated.
well designed poem, enjoyed

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sayed.
Another lovely write from a talented poet. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Praveeta.
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I really liked lines, 2, 7 9, 13 and 22,,,, and the last 3

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Trace, you made me work for this review, I had to go search ;-)
Trace

10 Years Ago

I was just teasing you. I liked lines 14 and 15 too.
Trace

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