Just a silly rhyme....sort of

It's satire people, lighten up ;-)

My life was never meant to rhyme

nor a stitch in time

although i do have rhythmy blues

metaphorically speaking, i sure can tap those shoes

give me prose any day of the week,

and I can certainly turn it bleak

frays upside down and sideways

that's the house specialty craze

my maze'd poetic verse 

is strictly unrehearsed,

prancing delusions

of uttermost confusion

if you're discombobulated,  kerfuffl'd

or bewilder'd,  join the cafe's allusions

 I told you I couldn't rhyme!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your words have rhythm and beat, who needs rhyme...seldom use it myself unless it is natural...but then there are those purists who believe form has to be followed always..

oh well...can't please all the people all the time...

and my poetry reflects my life for sure...not much rhyme...and at times the rhythm goes off like a bad song.

[Frieda P]

Thanks jacob, yep some people have strict rules about this poetry stuff, can't please em all is right.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Moonbeam you are too funny… that was cute and witty.

[Frieda P]

Ha I hope you're up dancing Dale. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Dancing? You want me to break a hip, LOL

[redflutterby]

Lol.... yeah Frieda geez!! Dont break a hip Cowboy... stick with slow dancing!! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yeah right, then I break my partner's toes. LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha so sit the fook down and I'll dance enough for both of us ;-P

[redflutterby]

Would that be table dancing?? Hahaha....;-pp

[Frieda P]

Pssh and tush, it's Sunday! ha ;-P

[redflutterby]

Lmao....oh I guess we only dance on tables the rest of the week!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I danced on a table once for a friends Birthday.

[redflutterby]

Lmao....did someone get video of that??? ;-p

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Pictures, no video. I was told that she blew one of the pics up and put it over her bed.

[redflutterby]

Lmao...id pay money to see that!! ;-pp

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A satirical and meaningful piece that is a pleasure to read, well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Thomas, jazz'd you enjoyed my rant.

[Raymond Federle]

ROFLOL...When some one says "metaphorically speaking", they mean "I'm gonna tell you some bullshit and you're gonna believe it whole heartedly and ask for more!" Well done Frieda! XD

[Frieda P]

Ha exactly! Thanks Ray. ;-)

[Einstein Noodle]

rhythmy blues, tappy shoes oh my ... i am incensed and outraged ... at such tomfoolery buggering of the sacred pen :)
shame on you.
and as they say in the hood "bare it girl!"
E.

[Frieda P]

Awh kiss my fine arse E ;) I meant grazie.....

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha truly laughing out loud right now ... good Frieda!
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I rhyme by accident sometime. Hard to make words dance on the page like music. I like the thoughts and the ending. Thank you for sharing the thoughts on my favorite topic. Writing.
Coyote

[Mark]

heh okay but you have to bare it :P

[Frieda P]

And grin too right? ;-)

[Mark]

of course. :)

[KeeD]

I like yours style but that offer is tempting aye :P haha fun stuff FreFre < 3

[Frieda P]

Ha....not going to say what I'm thinking Kee! ;-)

[KeeD]

curiosity is a boner :P

[Frieda P]

Jaysus.....I can't believe you went there, even for you! ;-P

[KeeD]

Lol .. idk what i did "whistles"

[Devesh]

I'm giggling like a little school boy high on ice lollies right now. You outdo yourself, William. Every single time.

[Frieda P]

Haha you're review is funnier than this! Ice lollies ;-)

[Devesh]

I love ice lollies *-*

[Frieda P]

Ha you're just a big kid. ;-)

[Devesh]

Noppity-nopitty-nope William. I'm just a little goofy. :)

[BlackRose]

Terrific rhyming piece till the clever end.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille BlackRose.

[A. Amos]

FP, Wow I just enjoyed and laugh all the way and yes again love the song... good job my friend

[Frieda P]

Yay, doing the happy dance ;-)

[A. Amos]

cool.......