Bumble on poesy's diaphanous vapors ~‏

For A poet...

prancing about on your

 illustrious painted  words

  finely tuned elusive emotions

      that leap from the heart

 my soul immersed in fine 

   pomegranate wine's 

     effervescence,    glissading   

        upon silken grassy gradients

             of yesteryear's intentions

  romancing the spirit's 

       rhythm'd inclinations

     within this enchantment

         of poetic's

 movements tempo

 inhaling vapor'd affinity of 

   ecstasy's diaphanous illusions  

       bumble'd upon convictions

             confection'd sensibilities

   floating on celestial air's divine

             wafting impulses

    ecstatically dying a little death 

          with each fine tuned melody

    dancing in the cadence of lusty 

             nectar'd blissful notes

                  of poesy's mesmerizing etchings 

                              upon a soulful caress

Author's Note

captcha~wooer no kidding!

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Dancing to a tune that's long since dissipated into empty air, and growing tired: each limb aching with every small movement because the dance has gone on for far too long. Dark, but willing, and as you so graciously put it: "ecstatically dying".
Every word was enticing, to say the very least, and the concept is presented in your usual style of a dark concept hidden carefully beneath fluorescent and bubbly words. I enjoyed muchly, well done indeed!

[Frieda P]

Woo I'm doing the darkly florescent dance of bubbly now! Thanks so much Tai.

[Avinash]

What an otherworldly effects your words have. .it has a floating effect.. intoxicating..enchanting ..mesmerizing...

[Frieda P]

Woo, I love all your words here, thanks so much Avinash....

[A. Amos]

FP you know me in your poetry i find elegance and charm, as always great work my friend..

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

As always great work Freida

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Chandradhish

[Scott Metro]

Some movement and a sense of excitement,,
Always charming word choices..
Pleasant read Miss Frieda..
Scotty

[Frieda P]

Thanks Scott, you're always so kind, muchly appreciated.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty.......

[Baby Ricochet]

A lovely dedication to a poet who definitely isn't me.

[Frieda P]

Haha, no it's you, but I love ya Baby ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

:)......................

[Baby Ricochet]

It's a drooling smiley face.

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm used to baby drool..............

[redflutterby]

I feel wooed here...lol!! Are you wooing me...you wooer?? Hahaha...

Sorry I lost my mind for a minute. Okay.... this is dazzling. Bright and rhythmic ...makes me feel all zippity doo dah and s**t!! Lol.. loved it. xo

[Frieda P]

Ha you zipp'd me, laughing my arse off here. Yep, I'm woo wooing you ;-) Jazz'd...and color me zippity doo dah'd....! xo

[redflutterby]

Bahaha...now you sound drunk woman!! I got your zippity doo dah..heehee!

[Frieda P]

I'm not but it sounds like a plan....go zip ;-)

[redflutterby]

Lmao....I'll join you in that plan. Be there in a zippity minute!! ;-pp

[Frieda P]

Ha I sent you a zippity pic ;-)

[redflutterby]

Whoohooo....got it!! You look mavvvelouusssss darling!! ;-PP
Haha...

[Frieda P]

zippityfookindoodah ;-)

[redflutterby]

You said it munchkin... ha!! ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

First off, let me say, I love the form and style of this write, and the easy breezy diaphanous feel. Then, I need to UGGH point out that it should probably be poetic movement's tempo, unless you wanted poetic to be the possessive in this case.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, I actually did want poetic to be the possessive, it's all about the poetry...

[Lyn Anderson]

then I wonder if it might be better to say poetry's movement tempo, since poetic has a slightly different connotation?

[Frieda P]

Hmm I don't know, does that sound right to you?

[Lyn Anderson]

It does to me, but hey, feel free to bounce it off other people.