Bumble on poesy's diaphanous vapors ~‏

For A poet...

prancing about on your

 illustrious painted  words

  finely tuned elusive emotions

      that leap from the heart

 my soul immersed in fine 

   pomegranate wine's 

     effervescence,    glissading   

        upon silken grassy gradients

             of yesteryear's intentions

  romancing the spirit's 

       rhythm'd inclinations

     within this enchantment

         of poetic's

 movements tempo

 inhaling vapor'd affinity of 

   ecstasy's diaphanous illusions  

       bumble'd upon convictions

             confection'd sensibilities

   floating on celestial air's divine

             wafting impulses

    ecstatically dying a little death 

          with each fine tuned melody

    dancing in the cadence of lusty 

             nectar'd blissful notes

                  of poesy's mesmerizing etchings 

                              upon a soulful caress

Author's Note

captcha~wooer no kidding!

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Dancing to a tune that's long since dissipated into empty air, and growing tired: each limb aching with every small movement because the dance has gone on for far too long. Dark, but willing, and as you so graciously put it: "ecstatically dying".
Every word was enticing, to say the very least, and the concept is presented in your usual style of a dark concept hidden carefully beneath fluorescent and bubbly words. I enjoyed muchly, well done indeed!

[Frieda P]

Woo I'm doing the darkly florescent dance of bubbly now! Thanks so much Tai.

[RichGee]

ABSOLUTELY MESMERIZING!... I've read this piece a bakers dozen times and
It is simply FLAWLESS...My God you are brilliant....The pomegranate wine has done me just fine!
You are a genius Frieda...

[Frieda P]

Woo, you just made my night sir Rich! Thanks so much....

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning...you never fail to impress, love it :) x

[Frieda P]

Grazie mile Tia :-) x

[s y e]

// of yesteryear's intentions
romancing the spirit's
rhythm'd inclinations
within this enchantment //

This is simply perfection, you have blown me out the window and left me speechless. What more can I say Mama? My Mama is the best!

Wellies & all that jazz! xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much noodlebumble, you're too sweet to me peanut! xo

[Eric Pudalov]

RAWR, gorgeously sexy poem! And you say it's "for a poet," hmm? Yes, I know how a poet can do that to us sometimes...almost in the same way as a skilled dancer or a musician.

"My soul immersed in fine pomegranate wine's effervescence," is so sensuous, as well as beautiful metaphoric imagery. My other favorite lines are "inhaling vapor'd affinity of/ecstasy's diaphonous illusions," and "ecstatically dying a little death/with each fine tuned melody." The poem itself evokes a song, in a sense.

So whomever this poem is dedicated to, I hope it would get them hot...lol!!

[Frieda P]

RAWR yourself ;-) Yes, exactly, music can have the same effect. Thanks muchly, jazz'd you enjoyed my pomegranate wine, you're too kind....ha, one can only hope, kidding ;-)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I read this over and over. It flows amazingly and just pulled me right in! Great job, once again!!! :]

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Brittany, glad you enjoyed my pomegranate wine! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

I wasn't sure what to expect with the title...that sounds like a word I would use ;P Well you certainly know how to paint illustriously with your words Mrs.R, and soulfully caress a reader's imagination in the process. Feels like the heat got turned up a bit at the end...maybe that's the pomegranate wine speaking, or I'm channeling my craving for a glass now having read this one three times. What more can I say love, your writing is brilliant, your talent is astronomical, and your imagination is unparalleled...take a bow Mrs.R ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Ha I like to keep you guessing, I'm floating on your words now Benji, whist doing the happy dance, so jazz'd you like this one...means a lot to me, thanks so much sweet friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I know you do Mrs.R ;P The pleasure is all mine...thank you for writing such epic works love, you're amazing :) xo

[Frieda P]

Woo now I'm getting high, and it's not the pomegranate wine either ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Don't prance too hard in that case love...you need those feet for dancing ;) xo

[icelandicblue]

A gorgeous field of words within your blissful notes of beauty Frieda. I too am smitten by your glissading imagery.

[Frieda P]

Always appreciate your kind words Anne, ha, I just love how glissade rolls off the tongue ;-)

[Einstein Noodle]

only got thru the title and thank you for the word i have been wanting for something in the works .... it is perfect ... diaphanous my new word of the day ... if i use it i will wait a month or two but probably will search my thesaurus so as not to copy :) and poesy!! where do you get your fodder?? ok now for your poem ...
another fine work Frieda ... the poet's all that and more ... using the title in the body gives me points of familiarity ... the form your lines take gracefully glissade me subtly to the right ... the wrap up leaves me held in warm ...so welcome in this nasty cold winter :) another fine poem missy
E.

[Frieda P]

Ahh all enticing words, I don't own them, you can borrow them if you promise to give them back my sweet friend ;-) Looking forward to reading that one. Thanks so much E. :-) x

[emmajoy]

' .. glissading ~ upon silken grassy gradients ~ of yesteryear's intentions '.. sometimes amazement in your words near drowns me, you go from one form to another, from one topic to another as if words were born from and of you, missus! There's prancing, dancing feel to this; just read again, slowly, slowwwly.. tis more than the scent of coffee in this.. tis a magic potion.

[Frieda P]

Oh my, no drowning allowed petulia, come up for air so I can proper thank you muchly my dear friend, your sweet words mean a lot.

[emmajoy]

Thank YOUUU (10 characters)

[Frieda P]

That's my line silly goose ;-) xo

[Vidya Bacchus]

I had to read this and reread it .Your words always leave me smiling because they are truly a thing of beauty.

[Frieda P]

Always happy when I can put a smile on your face pazzo. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes you are welcome chica :)