Dancing with fireflies

~ 'hugs from ten thousand lightning bugs'

Spinning under the gravitational

               whirl of starlight's lure 

 dancing with fireflies until

               twilight's dawning heights

 escaping in our own little world 

                       of  macrocosms' bliss

 my shadow melds deeply

                   enmeshed unto thy spirit

 as your wings wildly fondle 

                       this nectar'd confection

 twirling in undulating

                       symbiotic symphonies' frenzy

 we sway together in darkly

                             moonlit breezes' gaze

 arching backs together under 

                          this glean'd glimmer

 taste of your earthy musk essence

                seduces & tempts the senses  

 scent of emerging morning's arisen

                            sunbeams persuasions 

 embraces that dwell languishing 

                      ~  entwin'd til infinitude       

     

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

This was just every shade of lovely. When I read this I imagine the night lit up with nothing but stars and fireflies, new moon eclipsed so it doesn't take away from their luminescent brilliance. And then of course you dance among them to the symphony of their buzzing and the crickets' chirping tune. Thank you for sharing this Frieda, it was an awesome journey.

[Frieda P]

I'm tickled Ashira, love where you took these words in your poetic eye...thanks so much for your sweet words.

[Jack...]

I knew there was a reason to come back...for this is exactly what I have missed. Your words today illuminate my eyes and my mind as I now float through twilight skies, feeling the cool rush of mesmerizing stanzas filling my every thought with serene visions against a setting sun back drop. My sweet friend, your pen wields magic and I am completely under your spell.

Amazing just doesn't seem good enough.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, glad you enjoyed.

[Jack...]

You are very welcome

[s y e]

This song is my ultimate favourite, I had to sing it at a drama club I was in in front of thousands, haha. It's amazing.

As for your poem, my absolute favourite to date, girlie... I cannot tell you just how amazing this and how affecting it is. This was quite a sensual, seductive write from you, Mama.

// taste of your earthy musk essence
seduces & tempts the senses
scent of emerging morning's arisen
sunbeams persuasions //

Wow, wow, wow, holy crap woman, you are just amazing! You blow me away each time, I think I am in love with this poem... mind if I marry it? Ha!

Wellies & all that jazz! xo

[Frieda P]

Be my guest noodlebumble, it's a little buggy though ha....thanks so much, great song, you should record so we can hear you sing ;-) Grazie mille peanut xo

[s y e]

It's recorded, ha! Just not sure I want ya'll to go deaf!

[Frieda P]

Can't possibly be any worse than my voice............

[s y e]

Hahaha, I might let you hear it then........... maybe!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are so good at writing these vivid detailed poems .I am always awed when I read them :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille, but I like your banana better ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah well we girls have a special place for bananas lol.Thaat sounds bad even for me :)

[Frieda P]

LOL yes it does................ ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahahaha I have no defense here lol

[Frieda P]

Me thinks you should be changing that luvery angel avatar real soon ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well perhaps something with horns and a pointy thing to poke people with right .Me thinks you might be right after the banana debacle lol

[Lyn Anderson]

One of my kid's favourite songs, and now a perfect poem to go with it. Goosebumps a thousand times. ehem, notice no corrections ...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha you wanna know how many times I check'd this one like a madwoman? See what you're doing to me. ;-) Thanks, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, but if you do that, where will I get my fix?

[Frieda P]

Oh c'mon I can't be the only here that fooks up ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

No, but you are the most apostoph'd one.

[Frieda P]

Don't make me conscious about my curly obsession now...ha, If I were 14 I'd probably bet dotting my i's with hearts haha

[Lyn Anderson]

I did that. Now there's a confession.

[Frieda P]

HA well you can't correct that you can only hope one come's to their senses....

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh and the temptation to point out that come's does not need an apostrophe in the above comment I could not resist. I apologize profusely in advance of you reading this. Well, at least Vidya knows I have left her spaces alone.:)

[Frieda P]

Ha, what can I say, I'm hopeless's's's ;-P

[redflutterby]

Who wouldnt enjoy the embrace of ten thousand lightening bugs?? Hmm... well does sound a little overwhelming though. This was seductive in every dancing line. There is a sway and tug to it which made me want to dance wildly. Truly an alluring piece... that will linger warmly in my mind the rest of the day. xo

[Frieda P]

Ha I'll take overwhelming in that context ;-) Thanks, needed some perdy scribbles after the day I had yesterday, jazz'd you felt the seduction in the dance Red ;-) xo