Pen'd jurisprudence

What lies a'side these words,

     inky blood wells of

    truths be known,  

      sweat of tears &

           heartfelt soul,  

reaching into the vastness

 of perception and tangibility~

    swept away in analogy's idiosyncrasies 

when you smear undue sentiments &

flagrant disrespect, thinking you're

the only with a creative bone

within your over inflated ego's charms

          it render's you fragile and a bore,

   trashing poetry just for the sake of

 your own self righteousness & envy's spite,

  surrender unto your words

      you appropriated them; it' ll be a poet's demise,

snag'd whinging within docile purity's poetic principles

spew'd back in prose by witless assassination

until the day comes your pen is hung and undone,

& your shears are shorn of indignation's wrath

heed the warning signs, there are no marmalade fractures

             on the walls of cafe's intelligence

   jurisprudence's tenet will carve your skins

            doctrinality spear'd upon sword'd convictions

Do not tread lightly 

     upon the shadow cast

       the dark side of this establishment's

                                  wrath will eat you alive

Author's Note

Reviews

[RichGee]

Do not tread lightly
upon the shadow cast
the dark side of this establishment's
wrath will eat you alive....
That or Frieda will warp your brain cells with her wordplay!
You are Thee Goddess of Poetry....

[Frieda P]

Ha first thing I read after logging on, and you made me laugh out loud, don't give me that Rich, your brain cells were warped to begin with ;-) I meant thanks muchly!

[RichGee]

Hahaha! Yes mam!

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Wooooooo some1 killed the good moment:( I hate it when that happens but my dear friend ya know what ever they did they will answer for. Every1 will answer for their actions, Just breathe they ant worth it.

[Frieda P]

Oh you know how it goes Jon, it's all good, just venting a wee bit ;-)

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I do smilesssssssssss ant laughing but yeah and you been here longer than me! Nothing wrong with a good vent just don't fall to the paths of their beatings. Hugssssssssssss my friend:)

[A. Amos]

last line was something, great write and good read

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille A...glad I got that out of my system.

[A. Amos]

di niente... my friend:)

[Frieda P]

Oooh you speak Italiano, be still my heart ;-)

[A. Amos]

piccolo not much

[Frieda P]

Me either, they spoke a dialect in my house, it hardly resembles Italiano.

[A. Amos]

I cook better Italian than speak:)

[Frieda P]

Ha oh that I can do with my eyes closed..... ;-)

[A. Amos]

ha ha ha ha so will wait for your invitation than:)

[Frieda P]

Sure, what's your specialty? Cooking and poetry are my therapy...

[A. Amos]

well been a DJ, design shoes and shirts, cooking, helping running close business, sitting with old people listening their stories and gaining wisdom.. above all helping any one I can..

[Frieda P]

I meant food wise, but that's for that update ;-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks, not 'that's'

[A. Amos]

I'm well traveled guy and every country I been learn something special as far as cooking is concern:) Italian is the most easy one
:)

[Frieda P]

Have you been to Alberobello per chance?

[A. Amos]

No is that where your crib is?

[Frieda P]

That's where my family is from, it's breathtaking....

[A. Amos]

Next time will take details when in Italy, it's safe time:)

[Frieda P]

What part of Italy do you usually visit?

[A. Amos]

Milan and Rome

[Frieda P]

Have never been to Milan but every part of Italy is bella

[A. Amos]

That is true, I truly love Europe as when I'm there I always feel deja vu, as in my previous life was a knight who rescued princess from the dragon cave:)

[Frieda P]

Interesting, when I was there I felt as a dragon ;-) ha Seriously, I adore it there...

[Devesh]

How do you do, William? Always a pleasure to read your words. Hell hath no fury like Frieda scorned! :P

[Frieda P]

Haha, you're cute Devesh ;-)

[Devesh]

You should stop being so nice, I'll become cocky. :P

[Frieda P]

Ha make up my mind, you want one of these written about you too hahah ;-P

[Devesh]

I'm fine, I'm fine. You really know how to put people back into their place..you certainly put me in a crib lol.

[Frieda P]

HA I just noticed this, that comes from being a mother of three boys! ;-)

[Devesh]

Understandable :)

[redflutterby]

Well now....someone just took a pen lashing of epic proportions!! High five sista!! Best not mess with the Peppered Pickle...you will end up with third degree burns!! Love every word of this one... dancing in my boots! ;-)

[Frieda P]

Oh I think there's more than one, but there's plenty enough to go around, might I borrow that whip of yours? haha ;-)

[redflutterby]

Always ready for your use!! Lol....yes theres more then a few! ;-)