Pen'd jurisprudence

What lies a'side these words,

     inky blood wells of

    truths be known,  

      sweat of tears &

           heartfelt soul,  

reaching into the vastness

 of perception and tangibility~

    swept away in analogy's idiosyncrasies 

when you smear undue sentiments &

flagrant disrespect, thinking you're

the only with a creative bone

within your over inflated ego's charms

          it render's you fragile and a bore,

   trashing poetry just for the sake of

 your own self righteousness & envy's spite,

  surrender unto your words

      you appropriated them; it' ll be a poet's demise,

snag'd whinging within docile purity's poetic principles

spew'd back in prose by witless assassination

until the day comes your pen is hung and undone,

& your shears are shorn of indignation's wrath

heed the warning signs, there are no marmalade fractures

             on the walls of cafe's intelligence

   jurisprudence's tenet will carve your skins

            doctrinality spear'd upon sword'd convictions

Do not tread lightly 

     upon the shadow cast

       the dark side of this establishment's

                                  wrath will eat you alive

Author's Note

Reviews

[RichGee]

Do not tread lightly
upon the shadow cast
the dark side of this establishment's
wrath will eat you alive....
That or Frieda will warp your brain cells with her wordplay!
You are Thee Goddess of Poetry....

[Frieda P]

Ha first thing I read after logging on, and you made me laugh out loud, don't give me that Rich, your brain cells were warped to begin with ;-) I meant thanks muchly!

[RichGee]

Hahaha! Yes mam!

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, that pretty much covers it! A brilliant word lashing, and that entire last verse is perfection. You wield a mighty pen, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Ha, can you tell I was a wee bit miff'd that day? Thanks so much Rita!

[Brittany Zedalis]

thinking you're
the only with a creative bone
within your over inflated ego's charms

Oh, how this makes me think of someone, indeed. This piece is remarkable.

[Frieda P]

Ha let me guess, hmmmmm ;-) Thanks Brittany.

[paddy d daly]

Hey, don't hold back whatever you do;), does someone out there know who they are, if so they have felt the wrath of your tongue,,,,,,different in a good way, excellent read, enjoyed.

[Frieda P]

Good question paddy, do these people ever recognize themselves I wonder, thanks so much.

[star73]

very nice and creative good job

[Frieda P]

Thanks for reading star, just blowing off some steam here.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ahh, I think we must all have someone in mind when we read this -- probably one or two are thinking right now of a sarcastic p***y ...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha ha, yep it's all about you, you, you ;-P

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha ha very funny, I love you too:)

[Frieda P]

RAWR ;-P

[Scott Metro]

Spewing a little venom like a spitting adder...
Venting sulpher compounds like a ripe volcano..
Ahhhh...just another day at Frieda's place....lol
You gotta feel better after this...
Scott

[Frieda P]

Ha muchly, broke a wee bit o'china too, was ducky fun ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Good...huff and puff until you feel right..just don't cut off an ear...lol

[Frieda P]

Ha, never, how could I hear your big mouth then? lol

[Scott Metro]

I'll be in your head.....like a worm eating your brain...lol

[Frieda P]

HA I should have figured that was you.

[Scott Metro]

Is there a dessert bar in there..?..maybe a chocolate fountain...?

[Frieda P]

Ha dark dark chocolate yep, and later on midnight margaritas ;-)

[Scott Metro]

You'll never have to worry about Zombies eating your brain...lol

[Frieda P]

Isn't that a drink with pineapple or something, that's in there too ;-)

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty.......

[Einstein Noodle]

you are filling my notebook with new words every day ...thank you ... "whinging" ...

your poem ... blistering beauty ... shall i pass you the salt :)
made me sit up and take note ... and the warning to heart .. this isn't a rant ... and tho you may feel better this isn't just getting things off your chest ... this is noteworthy ... so very well done ... one for your new book :)))
E.

[Frieda P]

Ha no need for whinging, you. ;-) Just letting off a bit o'Italiano steam but muchly jazz'd it had your utmost attention. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Who put your panties in a twist ? Well I am sticking with you and say if you meted it out they probably deserve it (It wasn't me right ?Was it the banana ?You didn't like how i peeled it ? )

[Frieda P]

What panties? haha Nope not your noteworthy banana, not this time anywho. ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha I knew that .I ain't touching the other comment lol

[Frieda P]

:-P

[Rachelle]

Takes reading and rereading to fully grasp the value of this piece and it was all worth the effort.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rachelle, appreciate the read, just a wee rant to clear my head...

[kublakhan27]

You know the drill now Mrs.R...you post something new and my breath is taken away...you have once again vindicated my insistence that your voice is as diverse and multi-layered as anyone around. This is a side of you not often seen...I'd say that 'maybe that's a good thing' but it sure makes for good poetry...I have a vision of you writing this whole thing with a cathartic smirk on your face...you have gained my attention love, have mercy ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Mrs R have mercy on Benji, surely you jest ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yeah I jest ;) xo