Pen'd jurisprudence

What lies a'side these words,

     inky blood wells of

    truths be known,  

      sweat of tears &

           heartfelt soul,  

reaching into the vastness

 of perception and tangibility~

    swept away in analogy's idiosyncrasies 

when you smear undue sentiments &

flagrant disrespect, thinking you're

the only with a creative bone

within your over inflated ego's charms

          it render's you fragile and a bore,

   trashing poetry just for the sake of

 your own self righteousness & envy's spite,

  surrender unto your words

      you appropriated them; it' ll be a poet's demise,

snag'd whinging within docile purity's poetic principles

spew'd back in prose by witless assassination

until the day comes your pen is hung and undone,

& your shears are shorn of indignation's wrath

heed the warning signs, there are no marmalade fractures

             on the walls of cafe's intelligence

   jurisprudence's tenet will carve your skins

            doctrinality spear'd upon sword'd convictions

Do not tread lightly 

     upon the shadow cast

       the dark side of this establishment's

                                  wrath will eat you alive

Author's Note

Reviews

[RichGee]

Do not tread lightly
upon the shadow cast
the dark side of this establishment's
wrath will eat you alive....
That or Frieda will warp your brain cells with her wordplay!
You are Thee Goddess of Poetry....

[Frieda P]

Ha first thing I read after logging on, and you made me laugh out loud, don't give me that Rich, your brain cells were warped to begin with ;-) I meant thanks muchly!

[RichGee]

Hahaha! Yes mam!

[Tai Ryens]

Words serving as the end to a person who once found solace in them, not because of spite or expiration date, but because they were abused by the one who once utilized them for his own poignant use . . . Well done, it serves as a justice to those who dare defile literature.

[Frieda P]

Exactly Tai, thanks so much for this poignant review.

[Blue]

Wow, Frieda. The depth of your words is stunning.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Blue, name change yet again you nutter? ;-)

[Blue]

Lots of people still call me that haha.

[Frieda P]

Make up my mind who you wanna be when you grow up will ya? ;-P

[Blue]

Haha, I'll try. I like your consistency about "nutter", though. :P

[Frieda P]

Don't worry I wasn't going to change that part haha

[Frieda P]

And don't worry, I still haven't figured out who I wanna be when I grow up either ;-)

[Blue]

Take your time, mother nutter. Haha.

[Pryde Foltz]

when you smear undue sentiments &
flagrant disrespect, thinking you're
the only with a creative bone
within your over inflated ego's charms
it render's you fragile and a bore,
trashing poetry just for the sake of
your own self righteousness & envy's spite,
surrender unto your words
you appropriated them

No one gives what should be gotten like you, Frieda. I do not know the target of this piece but I am sure glad it is not me. Excellent piece.

[Frieda P]

I almost missed your stunning words Pryde, thanks so much my friend.

[icelandicblue]

heed the warning signs, there are no marmalade fractures
on the walls of cafe's intelligence

Well we've done it before, just point me in the right direction. Get out by sundown or else...You can Dep U Tize Me.

[Frieda P]

Ha ha you were already deputized, didn't you save your badge from that last asshat fiasco?

[icelandicblue]

I still have the poem sequestered away in the tower should a name or two need be changed. I am at the ready.

[Frieda P]

Ha think we all have a collection.....

[Cassie]

when you smear undue sentiments &
flagrant disrespect, thinking you're
the only with a creative bone
within your over inflated ego's charms
it render's you fragile and a bore,

This could not be more true. Thank you again

[Frieda P]

I guess we all know a few, thanks so much my friend.

[Tina Louise UK]

Brilliant! you sure have a way with words :) x

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Tia :-) x

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An engaging and clear piece that is easy and respondent to read, well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Thomas.

[gabrielle]

I could not think of anyone else who could pen a rant as creative, as brilliant and as sarcastic as this piece..i enjoyed reading this =)

[Frieda P]

Sarcastic, moi? Haha I take that as a huge compliment my friend, thanks so much. ;-)

[MsJewel]

Oh Frieda - I love this! I can think of one or two I hope will read this poem. You are incredible!
Do not tread lightly
upon the shadow cast
the dark side of this establishment's
wrath will eat you alive

Perfect!
:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Me too Julie, but do you think they realize it's even them? And yes, a few...Thanks so much! ;-)