Green Grass Dreamcatcher

i want to wake up in your arms at 3 AM

whilst a hurricane is raging            within  

those turbulent clouds and find my momentum

spiraling in heavy bays and raging gales

rotating around damaging unleashed surges

destructive force that slam'd unto my heart

i want to be your green grass dream catcher

                   & capture mockingbird lullaby's  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

And I want to live within your beautiful and enchanting poetry. I want to wake each day with a new stanza to greet me. I want the sunrise to whisper your words to me as it rises in the east. Nothing could be better in my mind. This is gorgeous, stunning and the kind of thing true dreams are made of. Amazing dear poet, you mesmerize me always.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Jack.

[Jack...]

You are more than welcome my friend.

[Shirlena]

My only complaint against this poem is that it ain't long enough but it's also fulfilling at the same time. It gave me all of it in less words and romance is such a decadent forces and a fantastic subject to share with everybody. As usual I love it.

[Frieda P]

Ha you got off easy, I'm usually much more wordy than that.... ;-) Thanks Shirlena.

[Shirlena]

Yes, I know...remember I read your poetry.

[Frieda P]

Ha smart mouth...you must be a new yawker ;-)

[Shirlena]

LOL just not accustomed to you writing with brevity.

[Frieda P]

Ha one of them is my evil twin me thinks, not sure which is which though

[Shirlena]

That's okay I'll take it :)

[m.s.early]

The wind makes for such torrential dreamy verse and soothing relaxed lyrics.

[Frieda P]

Thanks xavier, muchly appreciated.

[Scott Metro]

Very nice Frieda..
Short but well written....excellent


Scotty

[Frieda P]

Thanks Scott, glad you enjoyed.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....

[icelandicblue]

The stormy imagery works so very well in this piece.

I absolutely adore those last two lines:

i want to be your green grass dream catcher
& capture mockingbird lullaby's

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, jazz'd you enjoyed this one since I was on the fence about it....

[icelandicblue]

It's quite a beautiful poem. I love the fury of a good storm myself. We lose ourselves in the power of it all.

[Frieda P]

Ha you wild woman you ;-) Thanks again............

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lovely chica I know how you love when I call you that lol.This is so pretty and full of passion and intensity .You rock lady :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, you're right, I haven't come up with a good one for you yet, but I will ;-) Grazie mille........

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome .Take your time its gotta be great lol

[Brittany Zedalis]

I think I have discovered yet another favorite poem.

whist a hurricane is raging within
those turbulent clouds and find my momentum

Stunning.

[Frieda P]

Wasn't sure if this one was going to work, so thanks muchly for that Brittany, did you not love that video?

[Brittany Zedalis]

It's definitely interesting

[Frieda P]

Ha when someone says 'interesting' that means, not really haha

[Brittany Zedalis]

not true for me lol i do like the video. i like how they made it look like a drawing.

[Frieda P]

My son is a graphic artist I guess I more excited about these things ;-)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I'm fairly used to them since my hubby is also a graphic artist haha he designs the banner for a charity event held each year by the humane society and he works with 3D modeling for video games.

[Frieda P]

Ahh then you know your way around that stuff...

[Brittany Zedalis]

I'm alright with it, haha. It's interesting to watch someone work with it on a daily basis. I could never do it myself xD

[Frieda P]

Hubby must be very talented.....

[Brittany Zedalis]

he's been working with it for years so he's pretty good. he's making his own game right now.

[ron]

Love the poem.

spiraling in heavy bays and raging gales

rotating around damaging unleashed surges

destructive force that slam'd unto my heart


I would love for someone to be my "green grass dream catcher & capture mockingbird lullaby's "for me"

[Frieda P]

Me too ron, me too....I added 'green grass' after I found that fabulous video, thanks so much.

[ron]

You are most welcome Frieda.