Green Grass Dreamcatcher

i want to wake up in your arms at 3 AM

whilst a hurricane is raging            within  

those turbulent clouds and find my momentum

spiraling in heavy bays and raging gales

rotating around damaging unleashed surges

destructive force that slam'd unto my heart

i want to be your green grass dream catcher

                   & capture mockingbird lullaby's  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

And I want to live within your beautiful and enchanting poetry. I want to wake each day with a new stanza to greet me. I want the sunrise to whisper your words to me as it rises in the east. Nothing could be better in my mind. This is gorgeous, stunning and the kind of thing true dreams are made of. Amazing dear poet, you mesmerize me always.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Jack.

[Jack...]

You are more than welcome my friend.

[Mark]

Nothing like some snuggling in the midst of a raging storm. I love this one dear heart. It's honest and full of clear emotion. Very well done.

[Frieda P]

Wow, I've saving this one from you, if you know what I mean ;-) thanks Mark................

[Mark]

You know when I compliment you it's the truth as I see it. :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you're what they call a ballbuster hon ;-) I know you like this one cause there are no apostroph'd words ;-P

[Mark]

If that was the only reason I would have said so.

[redflutterby]

Short and sweet...thoroughly enchanting. Love the last two lines the most... sigh..xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks Red, I think most people are with you on those last two, always happy to get a sigh from you girlfriend ;-) xo

[Giggling Star]

Well Frieda, you've taken us on another poetic journey. And isn't it grand to have KL back!! Our very own watchdog!

[Frieda P]

Ha you gotta love her, she's keen. Thanks so much, ooooh another sexy avatar I see ;-)

[paddy d daly]

the metaphor that exists between love and the natural world is one you portray so well in this piece, the co-existence of both is almost inevitable, great work as ever.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for that great observation paddy, much appreciated.

[Traci]

i want to be your green grass dream catcher
& capture mockingbird lullaby's

A beautiful write, Frieda, especially the last two lines. Another favorite!

[Frieda P]

Hey Traci, good to see ya again, thanks so much my sweet friend!

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay, this is probably one of my faves of yours, especially the title. Now, maybe I am just nuts, or way more observant, or fail to see where someone else has pointed it out, but is it supposed to be whist or whilst?

[Frieda P]

OMG you're so good it's fookin annoying ha I'm always on the lookout too especially with you around, it used to be the kimmer that nabbed me....off to correct, thanks! ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

I love you too. Catch me anytime baby :)

[Frieda P]

Ha done! Grazie mille you pain in the tuchus ;-P

[Lyn Anderson]

Like I said, best thing about me is you know I ain't fakin' it when I catch those little things. No token accolades or cursory glances from me!

[Frieda P]

Hey you're good, you should get paid for being a pill haha

[Lyn Anderson]

I used to get paid for editing. I hated it. :) Now I just do it for entertainment. That way, if you annoy me, I don't have to review you, and the people who don't want proper editing don't ask anymore. lol.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

to me this feels more erotic and passionate as anything I have read lately. I could go out for a cigarette and whiskey...if I did either any longer. :) I could simply burst..and then your music eases me back down to earth. Masterful!

[Frieda P]

Woo I like that interpretation Queenie, I'll have both for you, although I don't drink whiskey, cheers anyway, thanks so much!

[kitty]

I've read a couple of your poems now. I like them, and the words are very pretty, but it does seem a little overembellished, somehow-- I have trouble knowing what they actually mean.

[Frieda P]

I guess over-embellished is my style, that's the beauty in poetry, it can mean whatever the reader feels or sees in it, thanks for reading and your critique, muchly appreciated kiltty.

[kitty]

My pleasure :)

[s y e]

Love, love, love this. I have a confession to make, I read this more than 10 times. I also read it out to my Gran and she loved, so you're getting a bonus from your little peanut tonight! ;-)

// i want to be your green grass dream catcher
& capture mockingbird lullaby's //

You blew me away with these two lines, killer ending that could have me landing in your wee hoose in 2 hours. ;-) HA!

I must admit, I do love a good, evil storm.

I think we need boots for this one. So hunter wellies & all that jazz! xo

[Frieda P]

Be careful when you come in for a landing, we're getting an ice storm in the morning, tawkin bout storm...and wow 10 times, that deserves new red wellies indeed! Tell gram I said grazie too...did you like the video peanut? x

[s y e]

Ha, wouldn't it be hilarious if you saw me above your house frozen? You could be like 'OMFG, there's a frozen noodle!" LMAO! She says you're more than welcome. The video was fantastic, I am watching it again now and saved to my favourites! x

[Frieda P]

You know what Italiano's do with frozen noodles dontcha? hahah

[s y e]

Cook 'em? :-/

[Frieda P]

Haha very good, go to the head of the pot...you'll be drenched in sauce soon ;-)

[s y e]

Ha. Ha. Ha.... No. I think I will pass, I'd rather watch a movie, interested? :-P With hot chocolate and marshmallows.

[Frieda P]

After pasta ;-)

[s y e]

You're not cookin' me........... I will bring pasta with me, penne pasta? Or do you want my sibling? ;-)

[Frieda P]

Is it homemade?

[s y e]

It's my sibling, of course it is! HA!

[Shirlena]

...and it must be mine HA!

[Frieda P]

The piece or the romance/ ha....just leave the video and I'll be content.