Green Grass Dreamcatcher

i want to wake up in your arms at 3 AM

whilst a hurricane is raging            within  

those turbulent clouds and find my momentum

spiraling in heavy bays and raging gales

rotating around damaging unleashed surges

destructive force that slam'd unto my heart

i want to be your green grass dream catcher

                   & capture mockingbird lullaby's  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

And I want to live within your beautiful and enchanting poetry. I want to wake each day with a new stanza to greet me. I want the sunrise to whisper your words to me as it rises in the east. Nothing could be better in my mind. This is gorgeous, stunning and the kind of thing true dreams are made of. Amazing dear poet, you mesmerize me always.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Jack.

[Jack...]

You are more than welcome my friend.

[Fire Mage Andrea]

Good poem.
I like how it brings together love and the power of nature

[Frieda P]

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed.

[Christina]

This is so lovely, you express things so vividly that it imprints such a mental picture onto the reader. Well penned.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the visit and your kind words Christina.

[David Scott]

Well, if the cat wakes me up, Ill help bring the hurricane... ;)
I like the video too.

You packed a few phrases in here I think felt less original than some of your work, but the concept was conveyed very effectively... so, is it bad to use popular motifs? In this case I think it worked well.

Thank you for the poem and the fabulous song!

[Frieda P]

Haha you and that screeching cat ;-) This started out in a whole different place, I found that fantabulous video and it just took on a life of it's own, jazz'd you enjoyed Scott.

[David Scott]

(insert a picture of Tweety Bird) "I thought I saw a putty Tat". ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha you're a frootloop hon ;-) MWAH!

[Tai Ryens]

You dedicate yourself to a storm, accepting that it would most likely last for life but feeling as if it's all worth it. That strikes home for me. I can't help but feel as if the last two lines are a fantasy, though: a longing for what's not to be, for when the storm would dissipate and the cycle of reparation could begin. Well done!

[Frieda P]

Capturing mockingbird lullaby's is most difficult, but it would be oh so nice, thanks Tai.

[Playing with Demons]

Such a beautiful and romantic poem, the words flow so well and are very descriptive
Thank you for sharing
Cheerio!

[Frieda P]

Oh Cheerio I love that, thanks so much for your visit and review!

[Playing with Demons]

:)
You're very welcome and thanks!

[Praveeta]

So romantic dear friend. Thanks for your daily dose of romanticism that carries us in our world of fantasies.

[Frieda P]

It's what keeps us sane, right? Thanks so much Praveeta. :-)

[Praveeta]

Yes, I agree. You are welcome.

[Frieda P]

Well you anyway, my madness is debatable ha ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your artistic romance is endless, another wonderful poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Dale, always appreciate your kind words my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always my pleasure moonbeam.

[redzone]

Frieda, I'll bet all the males at WC are wanting to be awoken at 3am in your arms and sending you"mocking bird lullabies" ... and then there is one who would take t the challenge of riding that hurricane with you feel its fierousity so that when the mockingbirds lullaby comes and is caught, the hurricane knows it has met its calm inner eye... I have a dream catcher over my bed, it has kept me sane (for the most part) and the nightmares away... but I think your idea of someone to wake up with at 3am is so much better... I love reading you creative mind Frieda... ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Haha sorry 'kept me sane' made me giggle a wee bit ;-) I meant to say grazie mille you wild and crazy guy x

[redzone]

As if you didn't know this already .. ;-p .. in other words thank you for th recognition .. in the words of Prince. " if the elevator breaks down, go crazy " I took his advice ;0)

[redzone]

As if you didn't know this already .. ;-p .. in other words thank you for th recognition .. in the words of Prince. " if the elevator breaks down, go crazy " I took his advice ;0)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think this is a hurricane of feelings...the raging of life that goes on outside the poem, but within the poem the arms reach out and hold and protect.

a friend of mine just sent me a picture yesterday...it was of her dream catcher right by her bed...

very interesting concept...imagine if it dropped the dream...would that hurt? would we feel the thump as our dream crashed?

you said a lot in a short space, and let us really visualize.

[Frieda P]

I had a really nice dreamcatcher, somehow it was lost in the move, thanks for your kind words jacob.