Tink got Hook'd

Tink got Hook'd

A Poem by Frieda P
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~another fractur'd fairy tale

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Tinkerbell got Hook'd before Peter could save her,

now there's a bunch of twinkin' fairies prancing around

she spends most days rolling her baby blues, 

since there's a lot of little ones whingin' ~


Wee scardycat pirates, afraid of fateful crocodiles....



© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P


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Haha Your wry wit is unparalleled in these parts Mrs.R...yet there is something curiously sexy about that title image, or maybe I'm the curious one...yeah that's probably what it is ;P Thanks for the chuckle my dear, I'll take those wherever I can get them these days ;P xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha whatever do you mean Benji? I think Tink needed a few lessons from you know who, just saying. .. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha We could all use a few lessons from you know who my dear ;)



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Love it… whimsical but with a point. One mistake can ruin your life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tink has a dark side, we've seen her pissed off with good reason. No one can save her, she's going to have to save herself but I think she has the right stuff...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

No doubt about that....she's onto something if she can fly that way....
Ha! All she needs now is a cigarette and a scotch.
Love this fractured fairy tale!
Life's full of em', so you know, playful write... and serious!
I like:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha she drinks rum Terry, thanks for reading my fractur'd fairy tale ;-)
Well, that's one illusion gone for a burton.. always thought Tink was a sweetie pie and that man with the extra was.. well, surplus to her intentions. Obviously not, you villainess, you! Lord help us all if you ever adapt the Bard's work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

10 Years Ago

Not me, sane as a cow swinging on chandeliers wearing a bikini .. the cow not the ..
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

LOL.....you always manage to surprise me Auntie Agony hahahah ;-)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ooooh the imagery............
Tink was a saucy one wasn't she. Love the humor in this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha I always knew she was with that twinkle in her eye.......
Haha! Hook'd, eh? So that's what we're calling it these days... LOL! You really can fracture a fairy tale, Frieda! (and the pieces are gems!)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh you know Rita is all this freaking snow! Thanks, glad you enjoy'd my twisted sense of humor!
got knives in me teeth and sword at hand ... i am ready for the fight ... bring it villainous swash bucklers! ... :))))))))) poor promiscuous Tink ... her love too big ... and poor Pete ...also too big ... the perfect conundrum for those bitten by crocs ..should be a warnign to all says i ..
so glad i visited... was getting too sappy in this noon hour .. love love love to ya best Frieda ever
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha need a toothpick luv?
Einstein Noodle

10 Years Ago

ahahaha did i say i love ya frieda? ... well i just love ya dahlink!
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh you make my heart dance! ;-)
you are a writing machine.............nice ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha annoying I know, my insanity leaks out through my pen ;-)
Soooo... Tinkerbell got hook'd on Peter? Hmmmm...I wonder?????? EXCELLENT! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You miss'd the plot or you have odd pet names Ray haha ;-)
I was gonna say "poor tink " but then maybe she wanted to get hook'd ,who is to say with these scantily clad fairies lol :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha I knew it but did you ever try to find a song for a fractured fairy tale??
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Only when he's hiding from his wife .
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Nope that's your cross to bear lady lol

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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