"Love's blindness or universal forgiveness
pearls of wisdom don'd in a pen's signature"
My favorite lines.
I love poems which deal with poetry and you nailed this one, Frieda. I love your alliteration in:
"Saucy soul sisters serendipitously saunter" and "Bodacious baubles bubble beautifully bound".
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Grazie mille Arzel, jazz'd you enjoyed this one, just so happens I adore poems about poetry too.
Maybe this should be on the front page of the cafe...cause it sums us all up doesn't it?! This is brilliant Frieda! It's what keeps me coming back here...no rules and no need for safe words:)
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Ha Queenie, I'll talk to management see what they say ;-) Thanks I'm jazz'd you could relate to thi.. read moreHa Queenie, I'll talk to management see what they say ;-) Thanks I'm jazz'd you could relate to this piece.
That's why poets can do what they do. There are no absolute rules. The words can fly, the words can flounder,the words can speak of a thousand things...or only one...
LOL … remind me to pass at dinner at chez Frieda. All kidding aside this was a really wonderful and elegant piece.
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Laughing there, I just threw that in for good measure. You'll have the best table in the joint when .. read moreLaughing there, I just threw that in for good measure. You'll have the best table in the joint when you visit Pryde. ;-)
There are so many words I love here. but the remarkable thing is they fit like they've always fitted. They are joined like its natural and its a wonder they've only now been joined.
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Ken, your words mean a lot, coming from a poet I adore, thank you muchly.
He smiles saying, "Yep, that about covers it..."
Me too. Sometimes acoustic guitar, no band, clear themes of ernest composure.
And others, David Lee Roth style, rolling vocals sexy, with all the flair and wile.
But you go beyond two styles, your eluding to at least 6 themes...
Good control of the movement and transition. I do these a bit myself.
Writing layered verse and rhyme scheme. Not easy. Most do one or the other.
You've a knack for this way of writing.
So I humble us both. How convenient.
Fun to read. Fun to think about.
If it makes me ramble... its a good thing.
I like your fruity bubbly bodacious bazillion floaty space words,
kinda like a fun house.
Cool write. And very true.
You honor poetry.
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10 Years Ago
Love your review Terry, thanks for your in depth review, jazz'd you enjoyed.
You have encompassed all of us on this site so well. I have read some pretty amazing poems here, learned some lessons from others and feel like I'm part of a community that understands each other. Well done Frieda!
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..