Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

 

 Entranc'd in your quiver

    my heart takes a leap

       dancing a'loft captivating

     stratospheres of blitzing stardust,

          radiating in tinsel'd azure hues

       wafting in violaceous diamonds

           of crystalline lapis lazuli shimmer

         streaming a delicate aria

             in its tempo's hypnotic glint

   cello's hum & shiver a whimsical melody 

                 commanding a prolific message,

          strumming across my heart stings

    striking old familiar love chords

                     striking harmonious notes

      beating in my aching chest 

                  a bumble of dragonflies 

              prancing overhead in 

                     perfect symmetry 

charm'd intentions etch'd

         makes my soul tremble and sigh,

script'd in a deep ginger'd esprit

                    within cobalt's luminous skies

Author's Note

Reviews

[Astro]

A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again kind sir.

[Astro]

That's just from all the dancing. :)

[s y e]

Ah Frieda, this is utter bliss. Your words put a magic spell on your readers and take them to this beautiful place. The beauty of your words jump out at me and try to pull me in and believe me, if I could I would gladly go, ha.

Perfection on your page as always.

Flip flops & all that jazz! xo

[Frieda P]

I'm taking you with me no matter noodelbumble! Thanks sweet peanut. xo

[s y e]

Wooooohooooo, wel that made my day! xo

[emmajoy]

'.. wafting in violaceous diamonds ~ of crystalline lapis lazuli shimmer ~ streaming a delicate aria ~ in its tempo's hypnotic glint .. '

Some write poetry, some write words.. you, Frieda, write magic! This is absolutely beautiful both in literary phrasing and style, plus - glorious word-paint. Love it!

[Frieda P]

Wooo petulia, I'm doing a hypnotic dance now in your glowing review, thanks my sweet friend, you made my day!

[emmajoy]

Welcome. Meant to add that the music is soo appropriate

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning, never heard of lapis lazuli before had to google it...loved this one, beautiful :) x

[Frieda P]

Ha I love saying it, just rolls off the tongue, thanks so much Tia :-) x

[Scott Metro]

This is a trip into magic words.
Expressive phrases.....
Smooth and rolling.

Scott

[Frieda P]

Come fly with me... ;-) Grazie mille Scotty

[Scott Metro]

:)
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