Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

 

 Entranc'd in your quiver

    my heart takes a leap

       dancing a'loft captivating

     stratospheres of blitzing stardust,

          radiating in tinsel'd azure hues

       wafting in violaceous diamonds

           of crystalline lapis lazuli shimmer

         streaming a delicate aria

             in its tempo's hypnotic glint

   cello's hum & shiver a whimsical melody 

                 commanding a prolific message,

          strumming across my heart stings

    striking old familiar love chords

                     striking harmonious notes

      beating in my aching chest 

                  a bumble of dragonflies 

              prancing overhead in 

                     perfect symmetry 

charm'd intentions etch'd

         makes my soul tremble and sigh,

script'd in a deep ginger'd esprit

                    within cobalt's luminous skies

Author's Note

Reviews

[Astro]

A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again kind sir.

[Astro]

That's just from all the dancing. :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Loved the vivid colors in this piece. I could see the colors as I read it.

[Frieda P]

Great compliment, thank you.

[sushi]

crafted minutely to perfection... Nice write...

Thanks for sharing....

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much sushi.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the poem has echo that sounds within the heart in accompany of jass

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed Sayed.

[Cassie]

This is so beautiful Frieda actually among the best I have read this morning. I love waking up to such beautiful poems.

[Frieda P]

I love waking up to the generous kindness of your words Cassie, thanks so much my sweet friend.

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW Fredia this is gorgeous !! So talented you are.. thanks for tagging me in this its beautiful !

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed Debbie, thanks neighbor.

[Debbie_Philly]

:) xoxox Your welcomed

[Rita L. Sev]

When you write of blue, my heart sighs, Frieda...

[Frieda P]

Ahh you're a Lapis Lazuli fan too, thanks so much Rita...

[Rita L. Sev]

I have a beautiful stone in a ring that belonged to a great-aunt... The color is mesmerizing...

[Frieda P]

Now that you bring it up, I remember you telling me that a while back...

[Mockingbird]

it's like you used all the lovely words of the english language and blended them together to create sublime imagery and deep emotion. also illustrates the experience of synesthesia. excellent job, frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mockingbird, truly appreciate your kind review, thanks for pausing on my page.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very beautiful poem with breathtaking images. Whenever I want to read captivating imagery, I open your profile and read your poems and just sigh. Wonderfully done!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Gleb, I feel the same way about your poetry. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Absolutely lovely this one and I loved it very much :)

[Frieda P]

Not a fractur'd fairy tale in sight, see I can be good? ;-) Grazie mille....

[Vidya Bacchus]

I see that sweetie but the question is "for how long ?" You are welcome :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, you're never happy are you? ;-P

[Ai Lun]

The best description of the rhythm of this poem would be 'it glides'. I'm not too sure how, but it's like I read it from beginning to end without taking a breath (I obviously did breathe but your poem was too entrancing for me to notice). Your delicate detail for things is something I would love to be able to incorporate into my style of poetry. 'tis an inspiring piece of art! :)

[Frieda P]

You humble me Aaron, thanks so much for your kind words, jazz'd you enjoyed ;-)

[Ai Lun]

You're welcome Frieda. 'tis my pleasure to tell you the truth :)