Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

 

 Entranc'd in your quiver

    my heart takes a leap

       dancing a'loft captivating

     stratospheres of blitzing stardust,

          radiating in tinsel'd azure hues

       wafting in violaceous diamonds

           of crystalline lapis lazuli shimmer

         streaming a delicate aria

             in its tempo's hypnotic glint

   cello's hum & shiver a whimsical melody 

                 commanding a prolific message,

          strumming across my heart stings

    striking old familiar love chords

                     striking harmonious notes

      beating in my aching chest 

                  a bumble of dragonflies 

              prancing overhead in 

                     perfect symmetry 

charm'd intentions etch'd

         makes my soul tremble and sigh,

script'd in a deep ginger'd esprit

                    within cobalt's luminous skies

Author's Note

Reviews

[Astro]

A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again kind sir.

[Astro]

That's just from all the dancing. :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A dazzling write, Frieda. You carried me away with your words.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Spell like, a spell to capture indeed, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille.

[Blue]

Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh.

[Frieda P]

Woo, five sighs, grazie!

[Blue]

Hold on. I'm on my sixth.

[Frieda P]

Woooo, now you got me swooning dear. ;-)

[msharma]

Lovely write up ,grabbing full of pictures.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much msharma, glad you enjoyed.

[msharma]

thanks to you too keep writing

[Tai Ryens]

Feeling as if someone you love is able to take you beyond the stars . . . You've penned an extravagant experience that should be treasured dearly by all. Well done, I like this

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tai, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...

[Ken Simm.]

A Fantasia of a write. This should be animated.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ken, I like where your mind took this.

[Len Gesinski]

The feeling of being pulled(lured?) deeper and deeper into the work.....excellent work!

[Frieda P]

Grazi Mille Len!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastically written.. Lovely expression!!!

Keep sharing..!!

Good Wishes..!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review, muchly appeciated.

[Imogean Tweetie]

Wistful and romantic, a true love poem… It made my heart ache and long to exist within it.

[Frieda P]

Thank you so much Imogean, glad you enjoyed,