Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

A Poem by Frieda P

 
 Entranc'd in your quiver
    my heart takes a leap
       dancing a'loft captivating
     stratospheres of blitzing stardust,
          radiating in tinsel'd azure hues
       wafting in violaceous diamonds
           of crystalline lapis lazuli shimmer
         streaming a delicate aria
             in its tempo's hypnotic glint
   cello's hum & shiver a whimsical melody 
                 commanding a prolific message,
          strumming across my heart stings
    striking old familiar love chords
                     striking harmonious notes
      beating in my aching chest 
                  a bumble of dragonflies 
              prancing overhead in 
                     perfect symmetry 
charm'd intentions etch'd
         makes my soul tremble and sigh,
script'd in a deep ginger'd esprit
                    within cobalt's luminous skies


© 2014 Frieda P


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A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again.. read more
Astro

10 Years Ago

That's just from all the dancing. :)



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A dazzling write, Frieda. You carried me away with your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spell like, a spell to capture indeed, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille.
Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woo, five sighs, grazie!
Blue

10 Years Ago

Hold on. I'm on my sixth.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woooo, now you got me swooning dear. ;-)
Lovely write up ,grabbing full of pictures.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much msharma, glad you enjoyed.
msharma

10 Years Ago

thanks to you too keep writing
Feeling as if someone you love is able to take you beyond the stars . . . You've penned an extravagant experience that should be treasured dearly by all. Well done, I like this

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...
A Fantasia of a write. This should be animated.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ken, I like where your mind took this.
The feeling of being pulled(lured?) deeper and deeper into the work.....excellent work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazi Mille Len!
A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again.. read more
Astro

10 Years Ago

That's just from all the dancing. :)
Fantastically written.. Lovely expression!!!

Keep sharing..!!

Good Wishes..!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your visit and review, muchly appeciated.
Wistful and romantic, a true love poem… It made my heart ache and long to exist within it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Imogean, glad you enjoyed,

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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