In this stillness...

In this stillness

      where no breath is audible

where violaceous storm clouds  

           seize the night

beseeching a calmness

                      in its intentions

when compassion flows  

                   into crevices of pain

and grace takes a giant stride

                       in man's footsteps,

star's align in perfect symmetry

                              of truth's authenticity

& genuine purity of friendship's

                          faithfulness never falters

in the ether'd dust particles amidst 

               mankind's rising dawn, 

that's where I'll meet you halfway

                         'tween moon's amber light

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Still partaking in friendship even when nothing is needed, still feeling the bond with them despite no necessity for them, and enjoying the presence of a companion in the neutral stance, and enjoying every minute of it. This piece shows the purity of friendship and the soft bliss that accompanies a companion, even in times of contempt. Well done, indeed.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tai.

[FrancescaX]

This is really good...I love it because its true.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review Francesca.

[FrancescaX]

You are welcome.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, unique and quite refreshing to read, well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words, much appreciated.

[Michael G. Smith]

I could feel the spirituality of your words.

[Frieda P]

Ah spirituality, now you're speaking my language Mike...

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write Frieda! Nicely written.

Kaze~ ;-)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Kazie :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome Frieda! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

that's where I'll meet you halfway...

That is more the crux of a relationship than love itself... This poem speaks so gently yet with such clarity... Aces, my dear... :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Rita :-)

[Pryde Foltz]

when compassion flows
into crevices of pain
and grace takes a giant stride
in man's footsteps,

There's some imagery. Love love love.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Pryde.

[Vani Jalagar]

Awe..this gives a wonderful feeling of love and compassion. "there's a voice that doesn't use words listen" , love is indeed such a powerful experience that it can make you to sense the "silence behind speech" and "speech behind silence" :)

[Frieda P]

So jazz'd that's where it brought you Vani, nice to see you again. You've been missed. :-)

[Cryingkate]

My Favorite part of this and works like it is watching Jacks Heart melt into yours.
I think for every ounce of sadness you ever feel Freida is a gallon full on Jacks heart.

I can't wait till the day someone shouts.. HOMERUN :-)

[Praveeta]

So romantic. Loved it!! This is going as my favourite.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Praveeta....!

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome :)