~ dancing in delirium's breath

Lost my grip of sanity one prolific twilight

  awash in splendiferous grandeur

wrapped in fiery heat of your verse's bliss

 i drink from its' licentious magical fountain

    breathless, you sent me swooning

ecstasy of bursting stars

   dancing in symbiotic motion

upon harmonious whirling moons 

   prancing in the danger of your toxic sublimity

     absymal profundity sharp as sword strokes

 sinful soul's zestfulness

          strapp'd in hysteria's restraints  

 derangement under a hypnotic spell,

          felicitously breathing in delirium

pain and pleasure of a  paradisiacal tonic,

             aching in this fix'd addiction

you invoke my sweet psycho

             touched by your trenchant reality

immerse'd me in your marinating juices

         if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce

savoring this tangy nectar'd oblivion

                  dancing amidst crazed fever's tumult

endlessly luxuriating in your poetic frenzy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Heat emanates from your lines and my mind is dipping and whirling along with each word. Theirs a sense of frenzied lust here. A complete loss of composure and control...a stripping away of the niceties. The entire last stanza blew my skirt up and off!! No strawberries needed.... can't go out for a smoke though. ;-pxo

[Frieda P]

Wooo your words are sweet like a chic-a-cherry cola ;-) Ha, thought you had feetie pj's on today thanks hon! xo

[redflutterby]

Just under my skirt!! Lmao...post another peppery piece and I might be dancing in my flannel panties!! Hahaha... ;-D

[Frieda P]

Oh I have one coming dear, stuck in delirium last night...have your f**s at the ready hahah ;-)

[redflutterby]

Lol... uh oh....thanks for the warning!! Maybe I need some alcohol too...hahaha!!

[Frieda P]

Ha make it a stiff one ;-) hahaha

[redflutterby]

Hahaha....always do!!!

[prachi prangya agasti]

mad with lust and ecstasy of love.... a powerful sensation comes from the lines depicted... as always a great piece....

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Let's keep dancing until there is nothing left, that's the way I live, well done.

[Frieda P]

Ha I figured you danced in delirium, grazie ;-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Another outstanding poem Frieda!

Kaze~ :-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kazie jazz'd you enjoyed this one! ;-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

:-D Your very welcome Frieda! :-)

[Blue]

Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.

Need I say more, fiery Frieda? :P

[Frieda P]

Come again? ha....hope you were dancing to this one Arzel! ;-) Thanks muchly...

[Blue]

Got my hormones crazy, to be honest! :P

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, you're cute. ;-D

[Blue]

Of course, I am. Lol.

[Frieda P]

Chic-a-cherry cola that ;-) ha

[Tai Ryens]

Driven mad by the lust and ecstasy of love, and the victim gladly accepts the insanity . . . If love could do such crazy things, it makes me wonder what woes could do. Every single word seems to suggest movement, and from that I conceive the thought of a love that never halts, perpetually moving to the tune that only they can hear, I liked this

[Frieda P]

I could dance to your chic-a-cherry cola review, thanks so much Tai....sounds like a nice insanity to me n'est-ce pas ?

[SAYED THANGAL]

really the poem is some thing beyond narration, because the words and images are inter linked

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sayed, glad you enjoyed this one....

[Praveeta]

Truly sensational!!

My favourite:

"you invoke my sweet psycho
touched by your trenchant reality
immerse'd me in your marinating juices
if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce
savoring this tangy nectar'd oblivion
dancing amidst crazed fever's tumult
endlessly luxuriating in your poetic frenzy"

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Praveeta, glad you enjoyed this one!

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome talented poet.

[Rita L. Sev]

you invoke my sweet psycho... Love this line! Great song to go with this piece, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Haha, it comes from personal experience. ;-) Grazie mille!

[TL Boehm]

again. The song choice is a stellar companion. love the phrase "prolific twilight."

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly for your chic-a-cherry cola review...jazz'd you enjoyed this one Tam.

[AYVID N]

Sometimes, madness is what we need. And sone people, as you rightly say in this par excellence poem, have that ability to drive us mad, take us to that edge. All this and more said in delightful, mind blowing verses here. Another beauty from you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

It's a sweet madness, the best kind Divya, thanks muchly my friend.