~Pausing on a sigh

I paused in your disposition,

an excerpt of my sentiment's

timely extracted passages

affection's cadenced inclinations

complexion's blush'd bias tendencies

dusky clouds amidst delectation's reflections

wildflowers breath at the nape of my neck

scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy

a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea

parched of wither'd revered druthers, 

begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony

etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs

rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves

smoldering in long ago places of nightfall's rhythm 

haunting wakeful hours of dreams without rhyme

wistful for the dance 'tween spaces of sublimity's poesy  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

Dear Frieda, you have a mastery over transporting your reader to places that can only exist in some impossibly beautiful realms of their beleaguered minds...Here, I was transported to a beautiful, hazy twilight with a dream lover in a quaint, lovely villa full of comforts, a poor, harassed me can only think of...

scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers,
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves

A thundering ovation!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Divya, that's the best compliment a poet could ever get, if you felt transported I'm ecstatic my friend!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your lines are always so awesomely penned Freida .they flow from the page into my heart with ease.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Vidya, much appreciate your kind words my friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I like how you paint a poem and your word flow seems effortless. Enjoyed this! :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Shaquana :-)

[Praveeta]

Your creativity flows effortlessly and you continue to amaze us with your masterpieces daily.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Praveeta, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Arthur Henn]

Sixteen lines of pure sweet sentiment... This touches my soul

"smoldering in long ago places of nightfall's rhythm"

I love this line (Above)

And the song makes this reader's heart smile... Pic flow right into your written word.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Arthur, glad you enjoyed, where's those poppies now? :-)

[Avinash]

Another beautiful painting by you..Ooops Poem :)

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Avinash, you're a dear. :-)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Wow! This poem has so much imagery, I had to read it twice to soak it all in. However, this only adds to the beauty of your words. As always, bravo!

[Frieda P]

*Smiling* here, thanks so much Gleb!

[Ai Lun]

If I haven't said it before then I shall declare it now. I love your poetic style! from the rhythm, to the word choice, even the lovely abbreviated 'd endings! Well penned indeed!

[Frieda P]

Wow Aaron, thanks, muchly appreciated !

[m.s.early]

all of your poems warrant a pause and a pleasant sigh :)

[Frieda P]

What a sweet thing to say xavier, thanks muchly :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Goosebump giver for sure. Especially paired with the music. I want to say wildflowers breathe instead of breath, but maybe that is just me, and if it is wildflower's breath, wouldn't it need an apostrophe?:) Love you!

[redflutterby]

Bahahaha....we are going to dub you the apostrophe enforcer!!! ;-pp

[Frieda P]

She's already been dubbed the apostrophe Gestapo Red. ;-) Thanks KL, not sure I like breathe, but as usual you're right! GAH ;-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Written with great intellect and yet still shows genuine emotion. Always a pleasure to read you.

[Frieda P]

Can't tell you how good it is to see you back Dale, thanks so much my sweet friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You make me blush Moonbeam

[Frieda P]

Awh that's good, I know you're feeling up to par then :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Getting there actually. Trying to keep from getting depressed.

[Frieda P]

Write something, that always helps me...x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know what you mean, I need to get to writing something.

[Frieda P]

I'd imagine you can't have a beer, so yep, start penning...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Not at the moment… maybe after I am done with these drugs.