Mindfield's windowpain...‏

~or insomniatic delusions

Peer out the frosty crack'd windowpain 

translucent poetry in fractured hand

vintage thoughts rise from a steam'd

    cuppa emphatic billowing overtures

prelude to the days's negotiations

darkly processing as ink bleeds

  out through  cynical purse'd lips 

   embers of dark eye's glean'd glow

mind field's traffic steadily high-season'd

   blinking lights dimly reflect'd thunder

       gingerly flavor'd pungency's flair

smacking on a charm'd lick of despair

   speculating rain'd on parades chagrin 

put on another pot of stimulating spirits

    peppering a racy melodious harmony

pen'd a snappy sparkle with a bite

  left out on a din'd windowsill overnight

hullabaloo's brouhaha made a boisterous clatter

   bedlam nearly snared the disquiet of will's disposition

dancing moon lover's save another testament'd hue

  witness'd by evidence within a cafe's smoky allusions

covenant's bargain within the scheme of another frosted avenue

    forced to whittle time in disguise flying above landscape'd rhyme

sword'd dilemma's cut another frothy fizzling perspective

    twilight closes illusion's blinds on facades picturesque view

  delusion's of a torture'd poet stirring in frenzy's  flurry never slumbers

Author's Note

Reviews

[Shirlena]

and these just roll off of you don't they...Girl you know you are a force in your own right or should I say write because it's all of those things and then some but I love it, keep 'em coming cause trust me I will get to every one of them. One of my biggest thrills is to get to read great poetry and you are one of the BESTest Frieda :).

[Frieda P]

Woo, someone scrap me off the ceiling! Thanks, you just made my day, or my week probably! Thanks muchly ;-)

[s y e]

Did you know you rhymed a little bit in this one, ha! ;-P I loved this one so much. I think my head just exploded to be honest, my brain feels like it's all over the place right now.

I loved this one though, need to go make sure my brain is still in my head though.....................!

Flip flops & all that jazz! x

[Frieda P]

Did I, my lord I must have been really tired ha...thanks so much noodlebumble, your words always bring a smile to my heart..........! xo

[Carolann Dowsett]

So amazing, the mind can be such a hectic place and that is oh too often at the times that we really need sleep. You have an amazing way with words Frieda.

[Frieda P]

It certainly can be...thanks so much Carolann, you humble with your kind words my friend.

[KeeD]

I could be trapped in an echo of my booming imagination, glistening the visions outside my windowed eyes but my mind hosts the interactions of ideas during these O'so sleepless nights. The wording in this piece was extraordinary, loved each line. Great write

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille BCE, jazz'd you enjoyed this one.

[sharonlee]

What a delightfully layered feast of imagery...

... sumptuous language ... gracefully potent xx

[Frieda P]

Woo, doing the happy dance to your review. ;-) Grazie mille sharonlee.

[sharonlee]

Sumptuous ...... ♥

[Frieda P]

Love the word 'sumptuous' :-) x

[Ahena MK]

forced to whittle time in disguise flying above landscape'd rhyme
sword'd dilemma's cut another frothy fizzling perspective
really good !!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Ahena, I think aliens were involved here too ha ;-)

[Ahena MK]

hahaha !! :) but thats a great poem !

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You really played on word. The poem is pun

[Frieda P]

Thanks Onyia-ota.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

That read like insomnia, frantic but magnetic... at least for me. ;) your closing line is perfection!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Travis, I knew you'd recognize this feeling. ;-) Must be the air in joisey.....!

[redzone]

this is heartfelt beauty, with Black Crows music, no not the beauty of a morning sunrise, but the beauty of a pain that windows into an lonely night where sleep avoids and only "talking to angels" prevails... you made me think that yes, a cafe is allusion/illusion, and even a bitting refrain can ease at times, the world still sits, like the woman in your picture placed in this poem, alone and staring through "windowpain" and those " delusion's of a torture'd poet stirring in frenzy's flurry never slumbers..." Frieda, your poem, your words embedded with this music has broken my heart again, you are indeed an artist... ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Ahh thanks muchly for your poetic response curt, didn't mean to break your heart luv, just telling it like tis. ;-) Smile my friend.....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Moonbeam you sure know how to get people thinking. To me the window and window seal represent an open path to the soul.

[Frieda P]

I like that notion a lot, and SO GOOD to see you back on my page Dale, have miss'd you muchly my sweet friend, take good care of you now. xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good to be back… I've missed you too Moonbeam

[Brittany Zedalis]

twilight closes illusion's blinds on the facade'd picturesque view

You've taken my breath away with this poem. :]

[Frieda P]

Oh my, thanks so much Brittany, muchly appreciated ;-)