Mindfield's windowpain...‏

~or insomniatic delusions

Peer out the frosty crack'd windowpain 

translucent poetry in fractured hand

vintage thoughts rise from a steam'd

    cuppa emphatic billowing overtures

prelude to the days's negotiations

darkly processing as ink bleeds

  out through  cynical purse'd lips 

   embers of dark eye's glean'd glow

mind field's traffic steadily high-season'd

   blinking lights dimly reflect'd thunder

       gingerly flavor'd pungency's flair

smacking on a charm'd lick of despair

   speculating rain'd on parades chagrin 

put on another pot of stimulating spirits

    peppering a racy melodious harmony

pen'd a snappy sparkle with a bite

  left out on a din'd windowsill overnight

hullabaloo's brouhaha made a boisterous clatter

   bedlam nearly snared the disquiet of will's disposition

dancing moon lover's save another testament'd hue

  witness'd by evidence within a cafe's smoky allusions

covenant's bargain within the scheme of another frosted avenue

    forced to whittle time in disguise flying above landscape'd rhyme

sword'd dilemma's cut another frothy fizzling perspective

    twilight closes illusion's blinds on facades picturesque view

  delusion's of a torture'd poet stirring in frenzy's  flurry never slumbers

Author's Note

Reviews

[Shirlena]

and these just roll off of you don't they...Girl you know you are a force in your own right or should I say write because it's all of those things and then some but I love it, keep 'em coming cause trust me I will get to every one of them. One of my biggest thrills is to get to read great poetry and you are one of the BESTest Frieda :).

[Frieda P]

Woo, someone scrap me off the ceiling! Thanks, you just made my day, or my week probably! Thanks muchly ;-)

[ron]

Wow. Very nice. I wish I could write like this.

[Cassie]

I missed reading you Frieda, Thank you for sharing this one. Really enjoyed it as usual.

[Rita L. Sev]

There are lines here that are like succulent fruits... this is an instant favorite, Frieda. Bleeding, glowing, harmonizing... the Muse is too busy being life support for the Poet to sleep...

[Frieda P]

You humble me with your kind words Rita, thanks so much...

[Ironbutt]

Well, well, well..now that was a word description explosion for the mind to calculate..and then retake. Well done and spun!

[Frieda P]

Well thank you very muchly, appreciate your visit and review!

[R. L. Hill]

Is still can't quite grasp what you do with these. The cadence of each line flows with ease like a brook over smooth pebbles

[Frieda P]

Oh I like that 'like a brook over smooth pebbles' sounds like poetry right there...

[Blue]

Insomniatic delusions? No way! Mine are never good as this! Hahaha.

[Frieda P]

Ahaha, I got lucky, the muse took over that sleepy morn.

[Blue]

Can we swap muse sometime? ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a cup of coffee, a pen in hand, and the day starts...as the poet rises above and looks below, choosing his next inspiration..

lovely poem, Frieda..

our mornings are like this....so are our afternoons...as poetry surrounds us and makes us tick.

[Frieda P]

Yes exactly jacob, why does everyone call me Rita ha, you can call me Al. ;-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh geez, i am so sorry...Frieda...well You can call me Betty!

[Frieda P]

Ha no problem, it's funny though, you're not the first one, I guess I must look like a Rita, thanks Betty!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you're welcome, Al.

[kublakhan27]

Every day feels like a negotiation, doesn't it Mrs.R? I love that image, and I love this piece...it is epic, which is saying something when it comes to your poetic prowess. What a lush cornucopia (like that?) of images, metaphors, and emotions you have brought together here...this is on my ever-expanding list of Frieda favourites, not that any other one is less of a favourite ;) Your poetry I feel in my bones, and treasure in my heart...amazing :) xo

[Frieda P]

Woo, you certainly made my night with this review Benji, you turned my head upside down, and I'm smiling like a damn fool now...thanks muchly my sweet friend. :-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha That's what your words do for me my dear friend, or should I say, what they do TO me :) xo

[Frieda P]

Now I'm smiling like a fool AND doing the happy dance. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Nice to hear Mrs.R...I like knowing you're happy :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

a real tribute to natural beauty, good verse

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words Sayed.