~Battle ASSHAT

Read Rita's' Assault Similes' follow up, it's a riot! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RitaSev/1311193/#comment-3279177 For just a chosen few, & you know who you asshats are...

Scream like a lunatic banshee

get all up in everyone's script'd pen,

call us whatever you please

you bullies are all assimilated alike

criticize the things you fear the most

you're weak in the emblematic knees

seriously, who do you think you're kidding, 

you've not a metaphorical backbone

so fire away, machine gun til you're blitz'd

ricochet us through the assimilated heart 

we're bullet proof epic poesy'd warriors

you shoot us down, try to murder a writer's spirit

take your best shot, try to blow us away

we're here with assault similes to stay

fell on your own sword and bled weakness

we've risen to the unverse'd occasion, 

our poetic souls are tougher than titanium

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Too cool, "Bullet-proof epic poesy'd warriors" now that's a title to wear into battle. My sweet friend, you have slapped someone upside the head this morning with this fire-breathing gem. And even in battlemode, your words still carry an air of poetic elegance, albeit while standing along side the cannons hollering "Fire!" Looks like a valliant victory is at hand and no peace treaty will be needed...just run'em off dear poet.

Amazing as always my friend.

[Frieda P]

Ha, can you tell I was perturbed? Some people just don't know when to call it quits...thanks Jack, you know where this one comes from! Jazz'd you liked my epic posey'd warriors ;-)

[s y e]

Damn gurl, I don't want on your bad side..... sheesh.... whoever this is dedicated to is in troubleee hahaha.

Nice rant. Just what I wanna do right now, LOL!

[Frieda P]

OH you know who this is about alright! haha, you could never get on my bad side noodlebumble! Rant away................

[s y e]

Maybe I do then......!

[Frieda P]

You do, ask Jack...ha he's a troublemaker ;-)

[Giggling Star]

LOL LOL LOL ... got a little bee up the behind ... annoying you this morning? LOL this is great! You tell em Frieda!!

[Frieda P]

Hahaha glad you got a larf from my hissy fit, some people can be so fooking annoying! ;-)

[Giggling Star]

...and don't I know it! ;D