~ Whisper'd Longings A'flutter

COLLABORATION ~ Jack & Frieda

My wanton heart fills my days within mist'd azure

flowing upon seas's of butterfly's lustful dance

shameless abandon of my licentious soul's abundance

Sunlight shimmerings confess dawning desires

Awash o’er wings of cobalt flutter’d fantasie

Singing sonnets of bliss painted mornings

Nimble movements nakedness in nature's eternal joys 

prances about euphoria's smoldering emotions

sentiments set to melodious twinklings of fiery embers

Ecstasy illumines floating whisper'd longings

dreams of feather'd fingers intoxicated yearnings

forever awakened by the essence that is you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Angel]

Oh...you two write so beautifully together! And you chose one of my very favorite songs...I've been known to sing the chorus to this while washing dishes or folding laundry...this and "Oh darling, please believe me...I'll never do you no harm...
Hey, I'm old, what did you expect??

[Frieda P]

Thanks Angel, this was my sister's favorite song too, glad you enjoyed!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much sweet Angel. Thanks for stopping by our world for a visit.

[Cryingkate]

I couldn't leave a photo in the comments so I had to make my own posting :-) Great Job you Two.
Ck out my posting when you can then I'll take her down later :-)

Hugs and Great Morning to you both.I'm watching the birds at my feeder this morning and watching the crazy silly Squirrels Stealing from the feeders and running around chasing each other so playfully and watching you too being so playful I decided to name the two red Squirrels Freida and Jack.
My world is bright and wonderful watching you all:-)

[Frieda P]

Haha you saying we're squirrely/ ;-) I'm a nutter but Jack's pretty normal, 'pretty' being the key word here! Thanks so much Kate ;-)

[Cryingkate]

Yeah Squirrely :-) But wonderfully so! Honestly though their names Frieda and Jack fit so perfectly.
Gary has gone to work out of town and so I'll have to figure out how to download the camera. I took pictures and video of them. When I figure it out I'll send you both the results.
I see where they are taking the goodies to 3 different places. Awe so cute they are!

[Jack...]

Connie, I can honestly say I have never had a squirrel named after me before and I sure Frieda hasn't either. I personally and extremely honored you would think of us enough to do something like that. I can't wait for the Saturday morning cartoon...it should be a big hit. I can tell you this, a squirrel is the perfect fit, because I am nuts about writing poetry with Frieda. Thank you so very much for this wonderful and playful review. It means alot.

[Cryingkate]

LOL Pleasure is all mine Jack. Jack you didn't have to spill your nuts to let us know how much you love writing with Freida. The Poems speak abundance a whole lifetime of seeds and nuts storage full :-) LMBO

[Frieda P]

LOL spill your nutz ;-)

[Jack...]

Yeah, the next thing you know she'll have me slinging my pine cone all over the place...sheesh.

[Frieda P]

Oh the imagery............................

[Cryingkate]

UH OH... No wonder the pines Whisper LOL..... You two are 2 funny...

[gabrielle]

Once in our lifetime we may find that one person who could truly awaken and satisfy our whispered longing and intoxicated yearnings…. Ah, such sensual romantic write.

[Frieda P]

If we're lucky, thanks so much for your kind words gabrielle, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thank you Gabrielle. Your kindness generates smiles this day.

[A. Amos]

Elegantly crafted and every word is shinning like a star in your poem, well done my friend. It's always a pleasure reading your work. Keep it up

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review, Jack gets half the credit here for his lovely stanzas, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

[A. Amos]

So congrats hi. Also for such a epic creation. You're most welcome..

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[AYVID N]

Spell binding images...leave me speechless. Frieda & Jack, your writing compliments each other's to create such wonders.

[Frieda P]

Ah 'spell binding' love that, thanks muchly Divya!

[Jack...]

Divya, thank you so much for stopping by and reading our poem today. Your kind words are always appreciated.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You two continue to pen pure beauty!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Travis!

[Jack...]

Thanks Travis, Frieda is a dream to write with.

[Pryde Foltz]

You, two, write so well together … seamlessly.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Pryde.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Pryde.

[m.s.early]

how romantic... you guys have an uncanny ability to speak with one voice. Bravo!

[Frieda P]

Thanks xavier, Jack is really a pleasure to work with, jazz'd you enjoyed!

[Jack...]

The pleasure is most definietly all mine X. Thanks so very much.

[Cassie]

You two rock!!!! it seems both your pens are entwined together, been long since I reviewed and this has been my first and i definitely enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

Thought we scared you away with our last poem to you, haha, thanks so much Cassie.

[Jack...]

Oh good, Sunshines back, I can stop whining now. Thanks so much my friend.

[Cassie]

hahaha.... my dear friends, that poem couldn't scare me, been so busy busy with work, family and that is why i have been away.

[Frieda P]

Is that Cassie whining again Jack? hahaha

[Cassie]

you caught me....hahaha...now am almost under the table hiding that you caught me..I take back that review...I meant to say, i was a bit busy...

[Jack...]

She is BUSY Busy Frieda...geez, give her a break. Waaaaa!!!!

[Frieda P]

WAAAAA..............

[Cassie]

hahahah jack...I already took back my words, no need to exaggerate...haha

[Cassie]

I hope you both read my poem and answer me that question....

[Jack...]

Which poem is that?

[Cassie]

My latest poem, titled bad manners.

[Poetic Beauty]

Yearning for desire sparks great insightful thoughts and descriptions. This makes me think of a fairy dancing in a meadow. Free to be who she is.

[Frieda P]

Just the feel we were going for, thanks Poetic Beauty.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Poetic Beauty]

It was a truly stunning piece.