~Exposure Senryu

you wear it well...

I bask in sunlight,

waiting bated & breathless,

in your exposure  

Reviews

[Jack...]

Now this is an exposure I would enjoy...be the best tan I ever had. This poem shines brightly on me right now and it is night time here.

Blinded by your talent my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

You say the nicest things Jack, I wish it would warm me up, tired of the cold, damp weather....it's cold in Texas too?...thanks so much my sweet friend.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Think of me and try not to laugh...and I'll wear it well Mrs.R ;P You know I'm always game for exposure any time the fancy strikes you ;) xoxo

[Frieda P]

Haha, thought you might get a kick out of Rod....you wear mystery well, where have I heard that before...so I take it you made it through hockey in one piece, good to know. ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yes, barely Mrs.R ;P xo

[Frieda P]

You get hit in the old noggin?

[kublakhan27]

Oh yes...;P

[Frieda P]

That might help release the kraken haha ;-)

[kublakhan27]

He's definitely getting restless ;)

[Frieda P]

Well carry on my friend, pen away...........

[kublakhan27]

I'll defer to CSNY for this...carry on, love is coming, love is coming to us all...;)

[Frieda P]

Oh really, when...........? ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Oh I don't know, it's probably another night or two away, but you never know ;P

[Trace]

I am wondering if the exquisite artwork inspired the words?
of vise-versa
either way,
Thank you for this piece.
Trace

[Frieda P]

With this one it was definitely the artwork, but funny thing is I started out with a totally different graphic. Thanks so much Trace, I sent you that link by the way.

[redflutterby]

Bated and breathless...for the caress of summer...or another heated love?? Lol... love the pic and the thoughts this little poem incites. Yes hun...you wear it well...the crown of poetic queen!! Of course I'm kind of partial...xo

[Frieda P]

Hmm 'incites' now there's a word eh? ;-) Thanks muchly, I'm jazz'd this one put a spark in your thoughts Red! You're too kind my sweet friend.... xo