Bella Luna che adesca

~Enticing beautiful moon~

Drink in this moment,

within your fickle heartbeat's eye

as the high takes you beyond

bella luna's mysterious allurement

the scent of bee stung wildflowers 

wafting over illuminated butterscotch fields

poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee

giggling at the sun's enticing intensity

cosmic fish do fly blithely

 overhead,

blowing kisses above the hemisphere

landing on paisley cloud bursts

singing in tune with moonbeams

drunk on cherry berry wine

a heart a'flutter in joyous jubilation

stardust twinkles in delightful glee,

speaks the universal language of the ages

as bella luna whirls in swoon'd adoration

whilst naked lover's dancing,

           seduces the world to spin upside down

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

// poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere //

I think I'm dreaming here, somebody pinch me, ha! You make the dullest, hardest days turn into a beautiful, stress-free day. This is just utterly breath-taking.

[Frieda P]

I'd pinch your cute cheeks if I could get to you noodlebumble! Ha grazie mille you made my day sweet pea. xo

[s y e]

Ha, you have something about my cheeks, woman! ;-P Always a pleasure. xo

[Giggling Star]

Such a sense of wonderment you portray. There is something so magical that can happen in the moonlight. A very descriptive piece.

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed stargazer...grazie mille.

[Coyote Poetry]

The beautiful moon can lead us to good places. Beautiful music and places you took me to good places and scenery. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Glad you were able to go there, thanks John.

[ron]

What a wonderful scene you have painted with you words, sweet, dreamy, enticing. Bella would you honor me with a dance, as I bow and hold out my waiting hand (ever so subtly).

[Frieda P]

Wooo, such a romantic response ron, thanks so much, glad you enjoy'd the dream.

[ron]

You are most welcome Frieda.

[Pryde Foltz]

as bella luna whirls in swoon'd adoration
whilst naked lover's dancing,
seduces the world to spin upside down

Count me in. This was a really fun and magical write.

[Frieda P]

Ha I knew I could count you in Pryde, thanks muchly.

[wordman]

I really enjoyed the trip on this write loved the imagery and the music blended to make the write a special one
ron

[Frieda P]

Thanks ron, glad you took the trip with me.

[MsJewel]

I love the way your mind works Frieda. You have a stellar imagination. The images you have created are lovely, but the thing I love most about this poem is the feeling it left me with... "landing on paisley cloudbursts".

100/100 stardust twinkles
:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Awh you humble me Julie, thanks so much for your kind words sweet friend. :-)

[Shaquana Adams]

I think of a really pretty scene when reading this. The colors came alive on the page. Great work :)

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, exactly what I was hoping for, thanks muchly :-)

[Avinash]

Are you a fairy by any chance? At least your words make me think so. Keep giving us more and making this world a better place. They always add few more colors in my mind with every new poem I read of yours.

[Frieda P]

Ha no, I don't see any wings at least. ;-) What a sweet thing to say, thanks so much Avinash.

[Scott Metro]

Beautiful Frieda..each word so carefully stitched..and such beautiful words they are...I'm sure if I opened your head a stream of succulent words would pour forth for ever..an artesian spring of poetic love.


Admiration
Scott

[Frieda P]

Ha that made me laugh out loud, there's scary stuff up in that gray matter too, I'd not chance it, thanks so much Scott, muchly appreciated my friend.

[Scott Metro]

I think your head is full of honey...flowers and butterflies..
Nice song with this one..classic light, soothing..a perfect song for wine and romance...am I wrong here..?

[Frieda P]

About the song or my head? ha....I love this song...

[Scott Metro]

Not saying...men have secrets too....

[Frieda P]

Hahaha touche!

[Scott Metro]

:)
S...........

[redflutterby]

Oh how the moon entices us to dance under its splendor!! This swept me away to a place of fantasy amidst a feast of sensory pleasures. The sights, sounds and smells of everything wondrous in being caught up in a moment or feeling. Sigh...I long to linger there...twirling in the ethereal light and fragrant night air. Amazing hun..xo

[Frieda P]

Woo what a poetic response, you should pen that my friend! Thanks muchly, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one Red......xo