Bella Luna che adesca

Bella Luna che adesca

A Poem by Frieda P
"

~Enticing beautiful moon~

"
Drink in this moment,
within your fickle heartbeat's eye
as the high takes you beyond
bella luna's mysterious allurement
the scent of bee stung wildflowers 
wafting over illuminated butterscotch fields
poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely
 overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere
landing on paisley cloud bursts
singing in tune with moonbeams
drunk on cherry berry wine
a heart a'flutter in joyous jubilation
stardust twinkles in delightful glee,
speaks the universal language of the ages
as bella luna whirls in swoon'd adoration
whilst naked lover's dancing,
           seduces the world to spin upside down



© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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// poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere //

I think I'm dreaming here, somebody pinch me, ha! You make the dullest, hardest days turn into a beautiful, stress-free day. This is just utterly breath-taking.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'd pinch your cute cheeks if I could get to you noodlebumble! Ha grazie mille you made my day sweet.. read more
s y e

10 Years Ago

Ha, you have something about my cheeks, woman! ;-P Always a pleasure. xo



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I can't help but notice the similarity of yours and Jack's writing style, Frieda. Both of you really have a wonderful way of writing themes such as this. I look forward to reading more. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I've learned a lot from Jack's writing, he's a truly gifted poet. thanks for the compliment Azrel ;-.. read more
That's so cool great write. :D

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Kazie. :-)
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your welcome. :)
I see so many colors when I read this, Frieda!!!!!! Sets my imagination on fire. You're writing is like a breath of fresh air, I tell you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

ANNABELLE LEE! Where you been girl, have missed you...thanks muchly!
Amazing beauty in every line Frieda. "The scent of bee stung wildflowers" left me speechless. Nature is full of wonders but you added a delight ful and magical touch to it. A priceless creation from you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, you humble me with your kind words, truly.
AYVID N

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome Frieda! Have an absolutely amazing day.
Frieda, your luna is bella, your poem is bella bella, and you my sweet friend are beyond bella bella bella cause you wrap us readers around your "bee stung wildflowers, poppies and cherry berry wine" and then, and then have us dancing naked turning the world upside down.. from where I'm standing Frieda the world seems suddenly and wonderfully right side up. And to think you did this with the artistic simplicity of your heart.. people may think it's the cherry berry, but i would swear its the star dust twinkles... this is 5snaps 4twirls and an uncountable number of sighs.. hmmmm have I mentioned how much I love your poem Frieda.. ~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woo, now I'm doing the naked stardust twinkle dance to your review curt. ;-) I meant you made my ni.. read more
redzone

10 Years Ago

awww Frieda.. mind if I dance with ya.. I still have my nakedness on.. er.. I meant your welcome!!
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You make me larf curt...sure dancing and poetry are the only things that keep me sane....x
A dreamy quality, like the moon, lovely this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks KL, glad you enjoyed this one.
a reverent feeling of never really seeing a tainted eye, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Thomas.
Lovely...except the photobucket picture you added was gone by the time I got here...boo hoo













































Posted 10 Years Ago


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Angel

10 Years Ago

I'm much better, thanks, Luv. I had closed my reviews till I could catch up with all the requests t.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Glad to hear you're doing better, you were miss'd, same here, my account was closed for a bit, and I.. read more
Angel

10 Years Ago

happy to be here, hun.
I'm loving the vivid imagery in this. :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Brittany :-)
Your vivid descriptions leave me speechless.You know how much I love to talk so this is a true compliment lol.Beautiful lines my dear:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Holy smokes, that quite a feat, ahaha, thanks so much Vidya! ;-)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Hahaha you are indeed right lol.You are welcome Freida ,it was a pleasure as always:)

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Added on February 2, 2014
Last Updated on February 3, 2014
Tags: Beautiful moon, bella luna, moments, wonderment, wildflowers, drunk, fantasy, love

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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