Bella Luna che adesca

~Enticing beautiful moon~

Drink in this moment,

within your fickle heartbeat's eye

as the high takes you beyond

bella luna's mysterious allurement

the scent of bee stung wildflowers 

wafting over illuminated butterscotch fields

poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee

giggling at the sun's enticing intensity

cosmic fish do fly blithely

 overhead,

blowing kisses above the hemisphere

landing on paisley cloud bursts

singing in tune with moonbeams

drunk on cherry berry wine

a heart a'flutter in joyous jubilation

stardust twinkles in delightful glee,

speaks the universal language of the ages

as bella luna whirls in swoon'd adoration

whilst naked lover's dancing,

           seduces the world to spin upside down

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

// poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere //

I think I'm dreaming here, somebody pinch me, ha! You make the dullest, hardest days turn into a beautiful, stress-free day. This is just utterly breath-taking.

[Frieda P]

I'd pinch your cute cheeks if I could get to you noodlebumble! Ha grazie mille you made my day sweet pea. xo

[s y e]

Ha, you have something about my cheeks, woman! ;-P Always a pleasure. xo

[Blue]

I can't help but notice the similarity of yours and Jack's writing style, Frieda. Both of you really have a wonderful way of writing themes such as this. I look forward to reading more. :)

[Frieda P]

I've learned a lot from Jack's writing, he's a truly gifted poet. thanks for the compliment Azrel ;-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

That's so cool great write. :D

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Kazie. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :)

[Annabelle Lee]

I see so many colors when I read this, Frieda!!!!!! Sets my imagination on fire. You're writing is like a breath of fresh air, I tell you!

[Frieda P]

ANNABELLE LEE! Where you been girl, have missed you...thanks muchly!

[Ayvid N]

Amazing beauty in every line Frieda. "The scent of bee stung wildflowers" left me speechless. Nature is full of wonders but you added a delight ful and magical touch to it. A priceless creation from you.

[Frieda P]

Thank you so much my friend, you humble me with your kind words, truly.

[Ayvid N]

You are most welcome Frieda! Have an absolutely amazing day.

[redzone]

Frieda, your luna is bella, your poem is bella bella, and you my sweet friend are beyond bella bella bella cause you wrap us readers around your "bee stung wildflowers, poppies and cherry berry wine" and then, and then have us dancing naked turning the world upside down.. from where I'm standing Frieda the world seems suddenly and wonderfully right side up. And to think you did this with the artistic simplicity of your heart.. people may think it's the cherry berry, but i would swear its the star dust twinkles... this is 5snaps 4twirls and an uncountable number of sighs.. hmmmm have I mentioned how much I love your poem Frieda.. ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Woo, now I'm doing the naked stardust twinkle dance to your review curt. ;-) I meant you made my night, thanks so much!

[redzone]

awww Frieda.. mind if I dance with ya.. I still have my nakedness on.. er.. I meant your welcome!!

[Frieda P]

You make me larf curt...sure dancing and poetry are the only things that keep me sane....x

[Lyn Anderson]

A dreamy quality, like the moon, lovely this piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, glad you enjoyed this one.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a reverent feeling of never really seeing a tainted eye, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Thomas.

[Angel]

Lovely...except the photobucket picture you added was gone by the time I got here...boo hoo

[Frieda P]

Hey Angel, good to see you again!! How you feeling? What's going on with your review box haha...not sure what you mean about the photo, thanks....x

[Angel]

I'm much better, thanks, Luv. I had closed my reviews till I could catch up with all the requests that had come in while I was sick...but I decided I'd rather keep it open. I may never get 'em all read...but I luv you guys, anyhow...

[Frieda P]

Glad to hear you're doing better, you were miss'd, same here, my account was closed for a bit, and I've never been able to catch up, we do the best we can...happy to see you girl! :-)

[Angel]

happy to be here, hun.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I'm loving the vivid imagery in this. :]

[Frieda P]

Thanks Brittany :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your vivid descriptions leave me speechless.You know how much I love to talk so this is a true compliment lol.Beautiful lines my dear:)

[Frieda P]

Holy smokes, that quite a feat, ahaha, thanks so much Vidya! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha you are indeed right lol.You are welcome Freida ,it was a pleasure as always:)