Dark Angel

Let me be your dark angel

monopolizing 

your fantasies

romping upon your fiery bare'd skin

whispering through the echoes of your mind

I'll possess your soul, be your every desire

small price to pay for that winding path to hell

Author's Note

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism goes over the top, glad you enjoy'd this one.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

"And let me wear a coat of darkness and feed your imaginations...live your fantasy...live your abominations...and then I take off my coat...how would you look at me?" Nicely written Freida...I kind of finding extremely romantic...

[Frieda P]

Darkly romantic indeed, thanks so much Chandradhish.

[SAYED THANGAL]

very beautiful exposure, enjoyed

[Frieda P]

Thank you Sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

very pleasure

[cycy]

Wow, blown away. I'd say more, but I'm afraid words won't do this one justice....once again..wow...

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks cycy for your visit and review, muchly appreciated...

[AYVID N]

Temptation dark and dizzy! No man with a breath could resist. Especially when it is wrapped in Frieda's unbelievly exotic and aweinspiring imagery!

[Frieda P]

Dark and dizzy, that's moi! Thanks so much Divya, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Lyn Anderson]

Sexy and dark, just the way I like it.

[Frieda P]

Ha why doesn't that surprise me...thanks KL.

[Avinash]

Well ! Men are programmed as such they can't resist that path even if it comes with a Warning :)
They risk everything , heart, soul, body and even their Gods...and that's why this will always remain biggest adventure for any man whose heart dared to beat for love.

[Frieda P]

Haha is that the problem? That's a poem right there, you should write it ;-) Thanks muchly....

[gabrielle]

Is there really hell? Ah, you make temptation sounds delicious. =)

[Frieda P]

Hmmm, that's a whole other poem gabrielle, I think so, plenty of places right here on earth. Thanks so much for your insightful review. ;-)

[>.]

Definitely a driving force i'd want in my life, no matter the methods the allure seems all too tempting to resist. LOVED it.

[Frieda P]

So jazz'd you enjoyed! Grazie mille BCE.

[Pryde Foltz]

I'll possess your soul, be your every desire
small price to pay for that winding path to hell

Something of temptation in the air, I think. Obsession is a killer.

[Frieda P]

But oh so enticing, thanks Pryde.

[Rita L. Sev]

Rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, eh? ;) Good one here, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Haha yeah something like that Rita. ;-) Grazie mille!