Unreal Eye'd Senryu

I sink to my knees

draining me with your glare'd stare,

swirl'd my emotions

This is not a human eye, just a sink photographed at the perfect angle and time, unknown photographer, thought it was so cool...I had to pen it.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Praveeta]

Lovely write and the picture is amazing.

[Frieda P]

That pic is something else, isn't it? Thanks Praveeta..

[Praveeta]

It is mesmerising. Iris looks like galaxy.

[Frieda P]

Hard to believe it's a sink drain..........

[Brittany Zedalis]

I've come to the conclusion that you have great taste in music, haha. This senryu is beautiful. I've seen that picture around, but I have no clue who took it either.

[Frieda P]

Haha I thought so too, thanks Brittany, it's a freaky pic isn't it? I caught it on Pinterest but it didn't have the photographer's name.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I've seen it on Facebook and Tumblr a few times. I think I might have seen the photographer's name at some point but I have no idea what it was xD

[Frieda P]

I wonder if that was his/her intention, or it just turned out looking like an eyeball....

[redflutterby]

Omg...thats just crazy weird!! Haha...

[Frieda P]

I know right, even when you know what it is, you still see an eye..........

[s y e]

This is uber, uber cool Frieda - You were right, I do love the picture.

Beautiful senryu to go with a lovely picture.

[Frieda P]

I was shocked that wasn't an eye....had to write it. Thanks, knew you'd dig it girlie ;-)

[Jack...]

Wow, that is a cool picture. I would have never caught that if you hadn't said something.

The senryu is just a beautiful as I woud expect it to be. Very nice Frieda.

[Frieda P]

I was looking for different images on Pinterest and came across this, thought for sure it was an eye....amazing, thanks so much Jack, thought it uber cool too ;-)

[lonelyas]

This is terrific! The senyru is brilliant.. I love senyru Had to have a go at this challenge myself...

sucking me way down
before plugging your vortex
black hole enchantment..