~Mystical Yearnings

I loved you 'fore the beginning of time

mystical yearnings captivated my soul

endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,

intoxicated in love's sweet cherry wine  

senseless I dance in  whirling euphoria

my existence lies in the spirit of heart

let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer

the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss

power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,

beyond the starry night, void of space

transcending all earthly joys

an aura of splendiferous grace & adoration

fiery sacred honorings tormenting skies

hungering for your taste of passion

drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"

[Frieda P]

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino in a bit...cheers love ;-)

[Tai Ryens]

A love existing not only in the physical expressions of it, but also as an essence of the spirit that transcends all and is older than time itself . . . Well done.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Tai.

[Pryde Foltz]

my existence lies in the spirit of heart
let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer
the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss
power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,

Very beautiful write, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde.

[David Scott]

You know Frieda, this felt less mystical and more like a dream come true.
Then again, life is a mystery... and love is the nectar of the mystics.
A lovely thought and a believable dream.

[Frieda P]

If this is a reality for you Scott, I'll have what you're having hon....and your avatar is freaking me out...no offense but you know?! I love ya! Mwah ;-) I meant thanks muchly......x

[David Scott]

Better to see you with my dear... What big teeth you have! ;)

[Frieda P]

RAWR...ha, you know the only thing I like about you guys is the Lidocaine .... ;-)

[David Scott]

I thought it was the nitrous...

[Frieda P]

I get my happy drunk on elsewhere......

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Superb starting line: "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time..."
Fantasy and ecstasy...this is perfect!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Dhaye!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

........... =)

[Giggling Star]

Every single line is a poem in and of itself. My favorite? "Senseless I dance in whirling euphoria". This is a great write Frieda! My absolute favorite of your poems so far.

[Frieda P]

Woo, doing the happy dance stargazer, thanks so much.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This has got to be one of my favorites from you, dear Frieda. Amazing. :]

[Frieda P]

Oh wow, you made my night Brittany, thanks so much! :-)

[Brittany Zedalis]

You're very welcome :]

[Frieda P]

I just wish I knew what the heck she was singing but it sounded good to me- ;-)

[Katherine R.]

Surreality!

Love it! You always do this just so perfectly! This one was so worth reading that I read it again!

[Frieda P]

Woo, good to know, two reads makes me do the happy dance! Thanks Katherine, jazz'd you liked this one!

[Katherine R.]

Happy dances, Yay!

[s y e]

// hungering for your taste of passion
drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy //

Isn't it funny how both my favourite poets on this site are both totally romantics? ;-) You know who I'm talking about... I loved this one, I know that if anyone said anything like this to me they would have my heart in a heartbeat, haha. This has me sitting here sighing, praying and wishing.....

I love reading your beautiful, sweet words. Makes me smile... my safe haven as you know. :-)

Flip flops & all that jazz! x

[Frieda P]

I think we all pray we can achieve this nirvana one day, and that it lasts...thanks little noodlebumble. xo

[Mark]

This one is very flowery.

[Frieda P]

You always say the nicest things Mark.

[Mark]

I don't wanna be 'd again. :P

[kublakhan27]

The last line really drives this one home for me...I would never want to sober from the wine that ferments in your pool or ecstasy. A bed of thorn-less roses changes everything...perhaps the odd thorn in my skin would be a cue to take the twitches and come for your healing in the quiver of carnal spontaneity. A bed free of thorns is an invitation to savour, to give in to the slight tickles of petals against my back and take out the playfulness on whatever elements of your serene frame that catch my eyes first. Alright, so I'm getting carried away, but it's in the words Mrs.R...your knack for poetic sensuality knows no bounds ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Wooo Benji, I like your review better than my poem, blew Mrs R's skirt right up! Thanks so much sweetie ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Your reviews often do the same for me love...sometimes I spend more times reading your reviews than my actual poems...always a pleasure Mrs.R ;) xo