~Mystical Yearnings

I loved you 'fore the beginning of time

mystical yearnings captivated my soul

endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,

intoxicated in love's sweet cherry wine  

senseless I dance in  whirling euphoria

my existence lies in the spirit of heart

let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer

the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss

power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,

beyond the starry night, void of space

transcending all earthly joys

an aura of splendiferous grace & adoration

fiery sacred honorings tormenting skies

hungering for your taste of passion

drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"

[Frieda P]

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino in a bit...cheers love ;-)

[A. Amos]

Holy cow Jack said it all...simply loved this. Piece!

[B.J]

Wow that is so romantic and lovely

[Demii]

I love how its said "mystical yearnings captivated my soul" as welll as "intoxicated with loves cherry wine" I love the sense of wording you use and the follow and passion in the writing, its really strong and deep, good job.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review demii, jazz'd you enjoyed this one.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Absolutely splendid my friend ,your poems are such a pleasure to read :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Vidya. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Blue]

You adorned this romantic piece with the summary of universe's creations. Not my style of writing but you are definitely good with this style! Looking forward to reading more.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Arzel, muchly appreciated.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautful just beautiful Frieda. :-)

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kazie, glad you enjoyed :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome my friend. :-)

[victoria]

Frieda,
What a beautiful poem! It certainly goes right to my soul sending me on a spiritual dance with bells on my fingers and toes flying through the universe dancing on a magic carpet to your music!

[Frieda P]

Wow victoria, what a glowing review and great imagery in your response! Thanks so much.

[Vandana Sharma]

A love filled poem and the great yearning will sure call back the lover.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review Vandana.

[Baby Ricochet]

Great photo, poem and music. I'd say it's the total package. Great work Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Baby.

[ashesonfire]

Wow your words are so beautiful and touching! I especially love the line "endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,".

Very beautiful and passionate poem!

[Frieda P]

So glad you enjoyed, thanks for your visit and review!

[ashesonfire]

You're very welcome :D